rate_review Reviews

Please continue! I love your story!

Who are these bastards who have been making bad comments. Honestly, there's nothing in this fic that can be justifiably be categorized as bad. I'm glad you're continuing! Just ignore those people, they don't know quality fics when they read them...

Hope you feel better. It sucks being sick. :P

i'm glad if u do continue this story i really like it ^_^

what!!!! NO! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! YOU CAN'T STOP! I REALLY REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY! PLEASE DON'T STOP!

I think you should get a beta for your beta cause the errors are just too much to count, especially the punctuations (what's with all the question marks?).

Other than that, great chapter, though a tad predictable.

yo.. interesting story, though i would punch the guy/girl in the face if he/she would've slept with my ex crush imagining me while she/he is fucking her/him lol, but hey thats me :D i would have imagine naru-chan giving him hard time and maybe then accept his apology. anyways update soon

I'm sorry but...i'm having a very hard time figuring out why it your so negative towards yourself. I've read your reviews and i failed to find even just one person outright complaining to your face or just being an ass in general. I can sense that you're easily discouraged, and just the teeniest amount of criticism forces you to berate yourself, but, unfortunately, that's what reviews are for hun.

You know, no one is blaming you for your lack of skill, everyone has to start somewhere, and if ever someone is holding that against you, then they deserve a kick in the nuts. However, the reality is that i've only seen people support you, so your attitude makes no sense.

I'm not patronizing you, i know EXACTLY how you feel. I used to feel down a lot for no apparent reason really but the past is long gone and now i write because i enjoy it. If your not doing this because you love it, then you probably should take it down and give yourself a break. I say it with all the intention of being a concerned stranger that you should really consider believing in yourself. Your not nearly as awful as you think, your reviews say so.

I've been discouraged too many times to even count, but now i realize that I should have loved myself more, and not listen to the voices in my head that tell me "i'm not good enough", because those voices are liars. You are not a loser until you throw the towel, in which case, your just proving to yourself that all those voices were right all along, by giving up.

Bear in mind that i dont think any less of you and i didnt write this to make you feel even worse about yourself. I wrote it because i CARE and that what your feeling has happened to all of us, its just you who allows it to affect you. So please, dont give up for such a pathetic reason, its really such a shame. I look forward to your next chapter, because you WILL post it, cause if you dont, then that just goes to show that you were right all along, and you've got no one else to blame but yourself.

You've got my support, so why dont you take the time to support yourself hm?

It's great!! Please write more !!!

Keep writing... I am enjoying the story. I love betrayal fics!

wow! this story is great, poor poor Naruto why must he always suffer like this, I hope you Up-date soon.