schedule
November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are building up to something good, but try to write more. I hope you are punching up chapter 2 now as well ^_^
schedule
November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the prolouge so far. I don't know why but for me it's always interesting to see Naruto in a depressed or angsty mood for a time, maybe because he always seems so damn happy! Anyway, update soon!
schedule
November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well geez I don't blame him for being depressed! Please update soon.