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by littleolmee

person llyoung
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 was wonderful. Thank you
person hina88
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! I liked that - becasue it had a lemon and it was good AND because the chapter itself was godd :) so yeah, i think it was good that sasuke made it clear to naruto the reason's why he hadn't stayed after - well, getting him pregnant i guess lool. It cleared up some fo the doubts for Naruto as well I think - so yeah lol. Cool chp. ^_6

Hina xXxx
person Anon
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Glad Sasuke and Naruto have finally gotten closer in their relationship and I can't wait to see what Naruto has this time. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person hope21108
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you for updating. I love this chapter. The fact you have not given up on regain makes me very happy. My advice for that story is what ever you think is good + 2 SasuxNaru sex scenes. (i love the ones you write they are the perfect combination of sappy my teeth are roting this is so sweet love and hot fucking i love it ^_^)
person roely
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that end was very satisfying!
person Kallie
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. But there was one thing missing that I'd have liked to see. And that was Naruto telling Sasuke he wanted to have more children. *sigh* Still, the extra chapter was wonderful. I'm supremely happy to have been able to read just one more.
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so wonderful! and so moving, too. and sasuke learning how to sew (or wanting to rather), even if for a serious reason, made me laugh. hell, it'd probably make naruto laugh.

but thanks for the update, i truly enjoy this story. and thank you for the kind words as well. and if there's another chapter of this, i certainly look forward to it!
person lo
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great ending. Well done that story was well put together and written. Good job!!
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kyahhh!(glomps you)Thank you soooooooooo much! I'm so happy that Sasuke came back. The seal thing was a really cool idea. This was all so wonderful.
person hope21108
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love you and this story if you could do somthing for to regain what was lost i would be so happy

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