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Ok, so I've only read one chapter so far, but i had to stop and say this is great so far. Not only does the story move along really well, but i havent laughed this much while reading fanfic in a while. GREAT JOB!!!

Ohhh..I so love this story. I can't wait until you update again. You rock.

Great chapter!) Can't wait to read about Sasuke and Naruto's big night. It should be good. I think Neji and Gaara are going to have one very fun filed weekend!P Hope thing go good for Itachi and Kyuubi. Look foward to the next chapter.

w000000000000t! i can't wait 'till Sasuke + Naruto get to the cottage!! Naruto losing his viginity? i want a front row seat! *grabs popcorn* XD awesome chapter. :)

Email me when you update!

In this chapter I got answers but I got very confused. I dont remember you mentionng before that they were ninjas. It might just be me but it seemed abrupt...Like how easily Gaara changed Neji's uncle mind even if you explained the true motives of such a turn around.

Why does Sasuke have nightmares? And why is Naruto so insecure relating to Sasuke's feelings for him?

Anyway, I think this is all for now.
Carla

omg!! Fun with Sasuke = SEX! = Even More sex = a very happy reader! <3
Itachi and Kyuubi are my Sasuke and Naruto's role models XDDDD!!
thanks for your lovely update and alert, looking forward to the nextXD!

shadowfax_00@hotmail.com.....love the story!

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i enjoyed it up till the end of the first chapter. many errors, and although your writing style is a little refreshing, it gets irritating a bit easily. the character personalities are a tiny bit annoying. naruto sounds too whiny and childish and he repeats his lines a little too often. we all enjoy sasukes possessiveness but you've used it a bit too much so its getting tiresome. the fact that everything in the beginning of the plot has worked out flawlessly makes the story boring. add something to it to make it more interesting. all i'm seeing is the same thing happening over and over again. overall, it seems to me like you're posting this for fun so i suppose criticism isnt really needed but just in case you take this story seriously, i wanted to give out a bit of help.

^_^ i love this. yes. really.

:P kind of written oddly, but oh well.

hmm.... update! send alert!
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