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for To steal a boy's heart

by Karmisael

person random reader
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue the story! Preeeeeeetty pleeeeeease! I like it a lot! It's one of my favorites! Please! Please! Please! I hope I'm not too late in saying this. I haven't been on aff in a while. Anyways...back to my ranting...please! Fan fictions are so addicting! I need them! I reeeeeeally love the plot! I also loved the ItaKabu twist! I wasn't expecting that at all! Anyhoo...please keep writing!
person Me!!!
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, i cant beilive you...you writing isnt perfect but no ones is! i actually LIKE this plot and am able get over the few mistakes. i never review but..you have upset me. *cries*

please continue on...and in a few years you can re-write it to a more perfect piece. i love the plot. i really do.

ill help you write it even! just please dont stop writeing!!!

gah, you'll kill me if you do...*on the verge of dieing...*
person not telling
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! DON'T END THE STORY THERE! YOUR WRITING IS REALLY GOOD!
person Lia
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that you're updating this story. I think it has a lot of promise. I hope we get to see the bandits Naruto and Gaara soon. But no rush. I like how the story is progressing. Good luck and update sooner last time!
person Pho
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love stories that take place in mideval times. I've only seen like 2 or 3 of these ever on this site. And I think you've done a good job. I hope we get to see Naruto and Gaara soon. I can just picture them as perfect little theives. And Sasuke is such a bastard, and it fits him so well. I hope he gets everything taken...hehe and i mean everything *thinking dirty* Well I hope to read another chapter soon, so get to it! And thanks for writing this.
person aria
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this. very intersting and original story!
it will be SasuNaru(NaruSasu)?
can't wait for the next. plrase update soon~
person Mehla
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very interesting. I hope to see more soon.
person Nyuchan
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far.

Please write more ^.~
person Dark Romance 1313
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it, please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pairings Sasuke/Naruto/Gaara Yum threesome *snikers* rhymes ;) Total slutty uke Sasuke (remember SasUKE)

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