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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is it hot in there or is it just the smex? *Hitomi fanning self to keep calm*
Other then the obvious misspelling of "desire" to "design", it's another smextastic chapter!
PS Orochi should never escape...NEVER!
Other then the obvious misspelling of "desire" to "design", it's another smextastic chapter!
PS Orochi should never escape...NEVER!
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O whoa - that was intense... good ^_^ heh, I like intense... and then the ending line 'I love you' yeah - I thought that worked out really well - lol just thought i'd say that. It was a great chapter :d Sasuke's suggestion at the beginning that they kill the others made me snicker lool (hope he wasn't entirely serious though).
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. I was kinda scared when Orochimaru took control. Thought he was gonna rape Sasuke or something. O__o
Luckily, Sasuke got Naruto instead.
Cute ending. The whole chapter was awesome. Keep it up!
Luckily, Sasuke got Naruto instead.
Cute ending. The whole chapter was awesome. Keep it up!
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...thats all I can say really because I'm just speechless on this chappie! IT WAS FRIGGING AWESOME! You must update again and soon! AND AWWW! Naruto finally said it!! So awesome! GAH! I want to kill orochimaru! BASTARD! GAH! lol ttul! Update soon!
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, you are so amazing.
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing as always! I can't wait to see what Sasuke's response will be on tuesday... :)
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Naruto told Sasuke he loved him!!! Too bad Sasuke is unconscious though! Great lemon! I sure hope Orochimaru doesn't succeed in trying to take over Naruto again.
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I thought Naruto was enjoying the roughness that Sasuke was using. Anywho I really enjoyed this chappie. Pretty soon Orochimaru is going to escape.
Well keep up the good work
ja ne till next time
Well keep up the good work
ja ne till next time
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, even thoughtg that was extremely hot! sasuke is going to freak! i doesn't take well to declarations of love! till next time!