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Wow...I didn't think this story could get any better! Naruto-Sasuke eye-switch?!? Talk about originality. Kishi's got nothing on you, babes!

I'm dreading when this story comes to an end - But atleast we have B&B to look forward to now! :D

Aaah, they switched eyeballs! Sorry, had a horror movie moment there . . . . Wow, powerful chapter. Even though Sasuke had his moment of worry about himself and his desires he switched gears quickly and thought of Naruto and how to save him. Looks like it all goes back to Konoha after all, hopefully his info will be enough leverage to not only get them to help Naruto and allow him to help, but save them all as well. Can't wait to see what you got in mind for the story next! Keep up the great work, take care.

Ah GOD! Your gonna save them right? Right? I don't know you well enough, I don't know if you like happy endings, or if you like to screw the reader around to no end. If it's the second option you may have a whole lot of people trying to kill you... just a warning. it wont me me, I'm likely on teh wrong side of the world, but someone will be ploting your demise. Erg. Not serious death threats. It's your story you write it how you want, and if you want to trumatise a whole lot of innocent readers, that's your perogative. BUT I will love you and worship you and praise your existance if you make this happy. Hell I'll write you a story, and Naruto Sasuke story (no where near as good or long as yours) but I'll write any story you want, and I'm decent enough at writing to pull it off. YOu could ask for Naruto in a easter bunny suit and Sasuke in a wheelchair and I'd write it for you. See this? This is me trying to buy you off, words are my only currency so I keep offering but no one actually takes me up on my offers. Take me up on an offer - I even have done one Naruto fanfic that you can see an example of my awesome powers of mediocracy. :P

Anyway! The story! The worship! The praise! Dear lords I'm worshiping and praising and praying to god you nice to Naruto and Sasuke. You are so good, you are so fucken brilliant that I'm fumbling trying to realise what's just happened in teh story and where everything will have to go. Kakashi can save Naruto, Tsunade can reverse the eye thingy, or it can't be reversed (whatever). Itachi can die in flames and horror, and Sasuke and Naruto can bonk and be happy doing whatever the hell they want to do... which is bonk and be happy. Please please please. I can't stop writing because you just threw this chapter at us and I was so happy because I needed to read somethign good, but it was too good and it wasn't concluded and I just neeeeed to read the rest.

Okay I better stop, this can only get longer from here on out. I await, with baited breath, the next update of this story. I await in awe and anticipation and other aliteration for whatever climatic ending you give. We will be happy no matter how it ends, so fear not we love you!

The end.
Kimra

OMG I thought I reviewed last chapter. Im so scared and nervous now. My heart is like pounding. I'm afraid to keep reading, but I'm going to. Please tell me my Naru is gonna get his blue eyes back! *groans* Okay, trying to calm myself. I'll just patient. Loves you.

holy fucking shit, oro's plans get more maniacal by the chapter!! and now the eye switch...wow! poor naruto and sasuke. but i love that you did that. it's unique and somehow makes me squeee for sasuke at least getting to keep naru's eyes since he no longer has *him*... and i like how you do kyuubi's reaction to the situation and naruto's and his predicament--you keep him in a realistic perspective, not making him overly affectionate and such like often happens in fanfiction. i like the description of his annoyance with naruto's feelings and emotions affecting him through their link, and.. just everything is really good! the "i'll help you, but only because it benefits me" attitude is right on. the banter about sasuke, bitch vs. mate, and the kit--err, kid, lol was greatness as well.

sooooo, now sasuke will be on his way to konoha.. ack! more drama and action to come, ne??!! i can't wait to watch (read) it all happen!! i hope sasuke can actually get the help for naruto he needs, and warn konoha in time. omg, if naruto's body is used to destroy konoha naru will freak!

~ lg

ohh, the tension, the tension I tell you... it has me sitting on needles. Great chapter as always. I will be roaming around the latest posted stories until I see that you've updated again...

omg!! i was choked up when i read that orochimaru had sasuke's eyes! and then to learn that instead of letting him remain blind, the doc put his lover's eyes in him...!! such drama! oh but please, please, when all is said and done and everyone (sasuke and naruto) is fine (not dead *brandishes computer virus*) let tsunade, the best damn doctor in fire country, correct this injustice! naruto without those brilliant blue eyes and sasuke without his ebony black/blood red eyes is not something i want to consider!!

or, you know, something less fanatic. *shrugs*

that said, this was so edge-of-my-seat exciting! i don't think i looked away from the words once! again, the eyes! but if i know naruto, and possibly kyuubi, they'll find a way to keep orochimaru from fully utilizing the sharingan. hopefully. oh, i'm so looking forward to the next chapter!

oh my god......Whats gonna happen now? Keep going!

*squints at review replies* yup I can safely say you love me the mostest :D XD

I like the past references to the anime, like the Haku insertions you add in, they’re a nice touch

I know the matter is very serious and all but the convo with Kyuubi at the beginning made me laugh, it sounded like Jiraiya trying to be a parent XD

AH! You extracted Sasuke’s eyes and Oro wants to replace them with Naruto’s?!?!?! (lol erm incase you haven’t noticed I’m writing this review as I read in case I forget to say something) TEH ANGST!

And Sasuke’s thinking about Itachi when Naruto has been taken over? *kicks Sasuke*

You’re bringing in the big guns aren’t you? Enter Kakashi! The ultimate cool of cool, who kicks everyone’s ass :D

Zrina, I spared you from the lynch rope last time because I trusted you and the next chapter wouldn’t hurt as much, but it did! You took out Sasuke’s eyes, that I could deal with, wouldn’t expect anything less from Oro, but you gave him Naruto’s eyes. NARUTO’S EYES! *goes into despair*

*twirls lynch rope* come along willingly and it won’t hurt so much

*pounces* I LOVE YOU! XD (I think I’m slightly bipolar XD)

okay now I'm completely up to date, and I can't believe I've been missing out on this, the hell is wrong with me?! screw the exams! (don't worry, they're finished now, so I can say that XD)

*does a happy clappy dance for Kakashi* will there be Gai too? O_O *loves on you*

Review for Chapter 51

lol trust me to stop reading just before the smut, XD what the hell is wrong with me? let's see if I can leave a proper review without going to reread all that and drooling. Honestly Zrina your fics leave a brainless wreck, I'm not sure how I function afterwards XD Right the chapter! Must not babble. I love your Shino, he's gona a personality and everything XD I liked how you showed what Sasuke thought of Itachi and still managed to tie it to Naruto. The ending made me sad where Naruto felt like he had a no-win situation. *tries to steal your Naruto* I'd look after him!! Ok going to read the next chapter!