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This chapter definitly had an 'aaaawwwwwww' feeling to it. Beautiful fluff.
A.S.

Things are starting to come together. I have to say I really like how you portrayed Sakura here. You didn't bash her; you presented her in a rather positive light I thought. Yes she still come across as having affections for Sasuke and desires to be with him; as their son picked up on, but well I just think it was done rather well on your part. Even her friendship with Naruto showed through in her concerns. You got to love Iruka, he is just such a lovable guy. Even with the very obvious link between Naruto and Kyuubi there before him he still looks beyond that recognize the boy before him not the creature being housed within. I guess what I'm trying to say is I really loved how all the characters were portrayed in this chapter, some might see this as a filler type chapter but it was golden to me. Wonderful interactions, hope for the future, great characters just loved it all. Thank you for the update, made my day. Keep up the great work, take care.

littleolmee

So typical! Just when everything is peachy, the old hag is entering...
Nice chapter! You rock!

Good chapter!! cant wait for the next one

I thought this chapter (70) was really sweet. I like the Sasuke and Hiroke interaction.

Great chapter! I love this story! I was so looking forward to Tuesday so I could read this story, but every time I do I always read through the chapter really fast, and I can't wait for the next one again....a vicious cycle...What will I do when its over?! I can;t wait 'til they face teh coucil, its sure to be exciting!

Zrina this was a soft and warm chapter to me. So nice with Hiroki loving Chichi and Nii-san. I was alittle worrie when Sakura call Sasuke to set with her,but he maded Hiroki and I feel better:)

Aww, I can't get over how cute Hiroki is- especially when he gets all cuddly with Sasuke. (squees)

This was a great chapter, I loved reading it. Sakura and Sasuke's conversation was really well done- they were very in character and Sasuke's responses were short yet definitely left no doubts behind what he wanted.

Aw, someone really needs to draw a picture of Sasuke with Hiroki on his lap. XD

Wonderful work. Keep it up!

I really LOVE your story. I enjoy everything about it: characterization, character development, PLOT, action....just everything. It's very well written and a very easy read. I adore you for writing this. I eagerly await your next chapter. See you next time.

I never want it to end. All plot, no smut, and still so good. And now the long wait till next Tuesday starts. Thanks for being so good about updating though, it's really awesome of you. I wonder what Sakura said to get Sasuke to leave her so abruptly. And I wonder if Naruto was aware of their conversation at all. I can't wait till they face the council.