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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked Naruto taking over Oro. That was a very neat idea. Great job!
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like all stories i get referred to on AFF.net i thought 'yay, p0rn!' (<--- sarcasm aka sasu style :9) but behold! Something worth reading lol. Plot orginal: check, No OCC: check, paragraphs that dont look like their written by a 14yr old on a pwp high: check, and believable sasunaru: check. This can only mean one thing in my opinion and thats its freakin' awesome. Good job. Its been awhile since i read something passable, nevermind this good.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sonofa-wench, cut me off. basically i said, my 'p0rn' comment was sarcastic. That you have managed to actually make me believe in AFF.net having a few good stories. That your story is freakin awesome for the fact that it doesnt sound like a story from a 14yr old on a pwp high, theres no OOC 'depise', characters are well written, the plots orginal 'bravo! been a long time since i found one of those considering a +3yr fangirl of sasunaru' and that its really a shame it had to end so soon. Good job.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh.... this is getting very interesting!!
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree there're so many crappy stories out there, esp. at FF.net, mostly written by some 14 years old. Sadly they actually feed on each other. Anyway, I enjoy this chapter. Oro's losing his mind, isn't he?
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a very interesting chapter. I particularly liked how you showed Naruto and Kybii taking a strong presence in Oro’s mind. And Naruto was growing, so cool. He’ll be bigger and taller than SasuChan in no time. ^ ^
- ching1
- ching1
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and the author gives hope where once there was none! for sasuke that is. i knew you wouldn't kill naruto. sasuke just didn't believe. *shakes head*
another awesome chapter. and i like your conspiracy theories! they do give a plausible reason for why kyuubi attacked konoha in the first place. and i loved that part at the end, well, both parts at the end... the dream was so sweeeeeeeeet, and then naruto breaking through was like the best thing ever! now sasuke will FIGHT! CHA!
update soon! i love this story!
another awesome chapter. and i like your conspiracy theories! they do give a plausible reason for why kyuubi attacked konoha in the first place. and i loved that part at the end, well, both parts at the end... the dream was so sweeeeeeeeet, and then naruto breaking through was like the best thing ever! now sasuke will FIGHT! CHA!
update soon! i love this story!
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I cant wait to see what comes next!!!! Maybe a trap to keep the Snake while kyuubi eats it? He deserves to die! Nyan! Long live Naruto and Sasuke! Nyan! *cringes* sorry... fangirlism plus extra sugar... nyan! Update soon!
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, still reading, still love this story to peices! I'm cheering you on k? yea yea! write write!
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm still not that happy with Orochimary taking Naruto's body, but the dobe is still causing some problems to hat bastard so that makes me happy.