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Lol, Sasuke really doesn't have the best of luck with needles, does he?

Loved the part with him and Naruto in the tent- that was so cute!!!

Awesome chapter, really well done. I love your writing style and how it flows so well. I also am amazed that you can update twice a week! I barely update once a month. LOL

Anyways, can't wait till the next chapter! Keep it up!

Yay another chappie! Once again, i have to say i'm glad you update so quick. Anyway, this was another good one. You reaffirmed the reason why Naruto's sticking around anyway and also i think why subconsiously Sasuke wants Naruto around. Naru's the better part of his conscience really. Also it's funny how Sasuke reacts to Ryou's "attention" towards Naruto. How could anyone not be attracted to him on some level though? Blonde, tan, gorgous shinobi that Naru is *sigh*. Anyway, i digress, lol.

I truly have no idea about how things will turn out or the things that will come and i actually like that. Surprise me, and please bring on the smut-athon! BTW, there was just one thing i noticed, a small error in a sentence. It was where you wrote "A few strategically tags placed around the annoying jerk's tent set to trigger when said annoying jerk stumbled off to the bathroom in the middle of the night." I believe you meant "a few strategically placed tags" or something similar. Anyway, thought i'd point it out. This was good update soon!

Damn, Zrina! I love you soooooo much!

This chapter was excellent. Although I had a lot to choose from, (Sasuke being jealous, the action, the Rasengan!) my favorite was Naruto's speech to Sasuke about who they are. It was so tender, and it totally seems like somethig he would say and do as he got older. I am going to just go ahead and say you have mastered the skill of keeping Naruto and Sasuke in character no matter what they are doing.

I admire you completely. Even if I had nothing but time on my hands I wouldn't be able to write something this amazing. Your ability to write action is inspiring. You are one of my favorite authors and this story is one of my favorites. I'm 100% sure this is my favorite traditional fan fiction.

Anyway, excuse my rambling. I just wanted to let you know how awesome you are. I can't wait until Saturday! Oh my gawd...you know what? I just realized that I have turned into a Zrina fangirl...LOL

Love ya lots!

uh-oh..UH-OH is this gonna be sasunaru? i mean i like that just fine..but i thought this was narusasunaru

LOL, Aww, shucks, Sasuke bastard is really just too stubborn for his good XD, but the really GOOD news is there'll be at least 9-10 MORE chapters!!!!! *SQUEE!!! Happy Dancing!!* and only 3 more chapters to MAN SMEX!!! (I should probably be embarrassed about being so very excited about that, but I just can't.)

Hehehehe, I almost had a shit fit when Naruto ran out of the tent, I was like "DOBE!!! You're blond and a BOY!!!" But it was all good. And Ryou with hero worship eyes was just Classic! LOL sooo Happy, I loved Sasuke's reaction, that was the greatest, he was all "Back off Bitch!!!"

You always make my day, thanks again :D

another great chapter. i think it's slick how you made naruto not notice sasuke staking his claim. after all he would not be naruto if he did not sometimes act like a blonde. can't wait for your next update.

Ah a scream! Ah this story is amazing, I shall be looking out keenly for updates! Sorry I have not much more to say, but the story is so good it speaks for itself.

hell, i just love this fic. it's one of the best i've ever read. please, please, PLEASE update really really soon.

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!

Whose screaming?!?!?!? Do tell!

Hey hey! I have a question. WHen you starting kicking this around in your shapely noggin, did you know how you wanted it to end up? Do you have a clear idea of where you see this idea/plot /notion going?

I'm just curious. A lot of times I see people start out very strong and then abruptly taper off with their stories. Also, I on occasion dabble in fan-based writing. Mostly drabbles tho' because I am sure I would be one of those who fail to follow through. I was just wondering because I continue to be so impressed with your writing style, pacing - everything!

Sasuke is being such a toad. I hope Naruto totally pwns him when the time comes.....

Yoooosh! Once again, excellent read!

OMG i really love this fic. :D i think i reviewed this already under my other penname [ursan-canine], but whatever. GAWD i wait for every update of this fic. there's not much sasuke and naruto are still in character, considering both have matured and all. love love love his fic. and i like your consistency in both writing and updating. :D keep it up! :D