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“He already knew he was moaning like Jiraiya pumped full of Viagra and tied to a chair in a room full of beautiful, naked women.”

LOL, that was a great line! I am completely serious when I say that after reading that line I couldn’t stop laughing for five minutes. I was one minute away from being the first person to suffocate themselves by way of laughing.

Anyway though, I just wanted to leave a quick note saying that this, as well as the past few chapters, have been excellent as usual. Sasuke’s subtle progression into loving Naruto is great, and as such I admit that I’m a little worried about the ending of this fic. Of course I don’t expect it to be all flowers and roses (I mean, we are talking about Sasuke here and he just isn’t that type) but I do sorely hope that it does have some semblance of a WAFF ending. Regardless though, my best wishes for you and your writing.

Awww this was a great chapter but I can't wait for the next one that has the lemon with Sasuke on top!! It's about time that Sasuke shows Naruto how much he really wants him. ;) Loved the lime!

*drools* Not to say that Shippuu-Den wasn't awesome, but I'd much rather see this animated!!! O.o

Oh, and I also recced SoD on my LJ too, here. http://random-snitch.livejournal.com/

....Er well, it was probably more me gushing over you and your writing than it was a recommendation for the story!! But there's a link to it, so that counts, I guess. :P Hope that's ok!!

OH! And can we get some fanart for this fic? I mean, it's so perfect and has so many scenes to choose from!! I know SOMEBODY from this long list of reviews is an artist...Anyone?? ANYONE?!? I'm so about to commission someone for this...>.>

this was the best chapter yet! Sasuke is so much in love is so funny

Yessir this is going to be one of the greats on Adultfanfiction.net The Plot the romance it's too perfect,it has to be put in some kind of hall of fame. Just one real quick thing though in this last chapter i noticed you used contract and i'm not sure if you meant contrast. It's just a little thing but sometimes when ur writing writer's can miss the small stuff. Anyway keep up the EXCELLENT work can't wait till Saturday's update...XD...

Zrina....my dear dear Zrrriinnnaaaa....how can I say this gently, ne? *Blushes and giggles*...Well...I don't that I can, so here it is:

THAT WAS SO FUCKING AMAZING...SASUKE GET'S A CUM SHOT AND LIVES TO TELL THE TALE...OH HOW I LOVE THEE WONDERFUL, TALENTED, LADY!!!!!! YOU HAVE DONE WICKED, WICKED, THINGS TO ME THIS EVE!

*Snickers*...Also, on a more level note, I must say that I nearly gave my screen a soda bath. From:

He already knew he was moaning like Jiraiya pumped full of Viagra and tied to a chair in a room full of beautiful, naked women.

Let's just say this little SeveredWings has a VEERRRYYYYY vivid imagination and I actually SAW this take place in a little, slow mo, horror movie within in my head!

I....I...I really think I am broken...my brain....it's lost all...thhooouuughtttssss!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH


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Ja NA! Canna wait to see more!
Luvs ya,
SW

Another great chapter! Love to see Sasuke showing more interest in Naruto's skills now. I wonder who those ninja are.

*fans self* DAMN....I uh,...DAMN. Zrina...I don't know what to say. After reading that I fell like...DAMN. I don't know what the hell I feel. It makes me want to delete ALL the lemons from my stories. My gods...I...I gotto go take care of something...lol...DAMN. That was great. I'll be thinking about it all day...LOL. DAMN...

OMFG!!!
Yeah!!
I love you!!
I was impatiently waiting for your next update, I was pressing the refresh button over and over until I saw that you updated! I yelled for joy, effectively waking up my cat, and quickly started to read your yummilious story before I have to go to work! Thank you for the wonderful update. My question is how far ahead of your writing are you? Damn I can't wait until Saturday!!! Sigh......