rate_review Reviews

Great lemon!!! I love how Sasuke has finally taken the last step to accepting their relationship. I'm glad that the ninja that are looking for Naruto are good ones. Can't wait for more!! :)

Aww Sesame's cute. And the smut was glorious. ;) I love the Shikamaru line.

yatta!! smex!! that was great, with sasuke acknowledging bonds and such. ^.~ i wish i could write one whole chapter of pure unadulterated smut like you... man... *scuffs toe in dirt* i'm looking forward to sesame talking to them, and i don't even know why! i can't wait for the next chapter!!

Oooh, that was really really good. I loved that chapter! It's very cool how you can make Naruto uke, but still not submissive.

"Call me a lazy bastard."

"Shikamaru," Sasuke obliged.

That was genious.

Great job!

*sends stupid amounts of love wrapped in pink sparkly thingys*


will leave proper review tomorrow, am too tired :(

that was good! but i felt like u were in a hurry?

Smex!!!!!!!!

Yea, Sesame's going to find out exactly what they're doing in the lair ~_*

Hot... *fans self hurriedly* Great chapter!!! I loved it! There's a lot to be said for a dominating Sasuke and a receiving Naruto... nyah! LOL Great cliffie too... not too painful, just intriguing.... Keep it going!!!

I would just like to say that you made me fall completely in love with Sai in like, three paragraphs in chapter 22. "For instance, the bugman Shino had seemed calm at the time when Sai had asked him if he kept himself covered because he was ugly. Sai didn't mean to offend him really, he was just curious." *dies laughing* Damn you! I didn't want to like him! Bah. *sulks*

I would also like to say that it doesn't matter to me anymore what happens to Sasuke in canon because this is now my new canon! In character, sexy, happy yet believable, and difficult (they have to work for their happiness). What more could I possibly want?

I laughed when you said you weren't responsible for slipping grades and missed assignments because I am currently (and have spent a good portion of the day) not doing my hw in favor of reading this. *nods* Much better use of my time. Silly college. Gets in the way of good SasuNaru time.

Dude. I haven't felt this fangirly over anything in like, forever. Months probably. Write more soon please! Ya know, if you can work it into your schedule. Please. I don't want to rush you or anything. Take your time! *will be checking twice a day for more*

You totally rule.

SaraSG1

YAY!! More smut! And a two pager at that by the looks of it. There are quite a few things i like about this chap. The humor btw was so on point. The very image of Jiraiya in full Viagra mode and tied to a chair with chics around him sent me into piddles of laughter. And the banter between Naruto and Sasuke in this one was funny and very smart. It sounded natural. It's nice to know that Sasuke has also finally got those brooding thoughts on the right direction in regard to Naruto. Geez. It took the dobe to nearly get killed AGAIN for him to get some sense plowed into him.

Anyway are you ready?? I found just a few small errors. Where it says: "Arms wrapped around him as the fell toward the forest floor below." I think you meant "they", "Taking the initiative, he deepened the kiss while moving his other around the small of Naruto's back." I think you might've meant other "hand, fingers" you get it, and where it says "Only if you want strangled with them in the middle of the night," he growled." I think you meant "only if you want to get/be strangled with them." Anyway i loved this chappie and i cant wait till the next one for sure. And yes dammit i'm evil!! Gahhhh.

Buuut....you have seriously made Tuesdays and Saturdays my two fav days of the week with this story ya know!