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I'm flattered that u like my flattery...Anyway another well done chapter and if there were any mistakes here they were covered by the hotness that is sasuke seme...I can't wait to see where this next chapter will take sasuke and naruto. Can't wait till Tuesday XD.

i love this story. update soon.

Hmm, I don't think Naruto will remember Sesame as fondly as she does him if she happens to interrupt his and Sasuke's er, training. ~ Jelp

Awww Sasuke's first time topping..lol. It was so sexy, yet sweet!

Hey, if the WAFF fans don't want hardcore tell them to take a break and do your thing! Hell, I'll tell them for you! You thought it and you mentioned it, now you HAVE to write it or I'll die. Is that what you want? Do you want me to die?! Then who will finish my stories?! LOL

Seriously, I love this story and Wrong Number. When I finally get to the NaruSasu in my story I'm going to dedicate to you!

Now back to the review. You know, you really have a way of making your lemons really realistic, like Sasuke asking Naruto if he wanted another finger, and Naruto holding onto the headboard. The smallest things make it seem real, you know. Gods there both just so sexy, adorable, and still masculine. I just enjoyed it. *happily sighs* You're awesome, you really, really, are.

Okay, okay, okay. So I finally decided I should review -here- instead of on lj. xD So here we go. My ultimate, jam-packed review!

YAY!!!! NEW CHAPTER!! =DDD SO HOT.

Yeah, that's pretty much it. xD Just when I thought this day was gonna end with suck, you posted a chapter! It made my evening! Not to mention I love your writing and envy it muchly. <3

wow! that was so hot! i loved how sasuke was a complete natural when he was seme! its just cute at how he's finally accepting the relationship between naruto and him. and he's such a quick learner as well!

im just currently glad that the one's who spotted naruto and sasuke were friends of naruto... although i must admit, i dont really remember much about the sesame character. but nonetheless, im looking forward to see how naruto and sasuke handle being found out.

i look forward to the next update!

Ahh, i have a nice satisfied feeling in my stomach now that Sasuke has gotten his chance at seme. Very good might i add. You are evil for splitting it into 2 parts, but i forgive you, hehe. That part where Sasuke answers Naruto with "Yes" or w/e it was was nice too. He can't fight against the obvious man. Naruto would go around the world and back for him. Anyway, so the plot thickens ehh? Sesame is gonna get Naruto. This should be interesting. I am actually looking very much foward to this. It's gonna bring up a whole new set of situations here i imagine. You might as well make a series outta this girl lol. I'd read it like clock work. My question is though, is Sasuke gonna be ok with this? Sesame getting Naruto involved in that sorta thing might endanger him more and since he finds it so hard to never lend a helping hand...

Anyway, i found only 2 small grammar things here. Where it says, "Sasuke's back arched and his body strained as he poured himself into his lover with a ecstatic cry of release,". You meant 'an' estatic blah blah. And where Sesame says, "“It’s been three years since I'd seen him last, but it is hard to mistake him,” came the confident reply." I suppose you meant it 'isn't' hard by how she was meaning it. Anyway loved this chappie. This is probably my fav story on AFF right now :). Good luck!

Dun dun duh - And the plot thickens!! Can't wait to see everyones reaction, I had thought the watcher was Sai or one of the nine at first. That was another adorable chapter, the whole issue of ownership and belonging with the mine and yours comments, sweet, makes me think of His and His towels :). I love the teasing aspects of their relationship, it's so very them. I also love how realistic this is, Sasuke's first time topping, he actually thought about the whole issue of the differences in position, and I'm so glad you make that very distinguished observation about the roles. It becomes so much more meaningful, not that sex isn't just as much fun when it's just for the shit of it but hey, you're building a relationship, and I'm getting too analytical for this early in the morning :S. Til Tuesday, Ja ne, and enjoy your weekend :).

omfg, a HOT couple of chaps those were! omfg, sooooooooo veryyyyyy!! sasuke is finally opening up to his feelings (i loved the part about how him taking the dominating role, initiating things, would be him consciously acknowledging the bond he'd been trying to downplay even to himself and reaffirming the vow he'd made to himself concerning naruto in the heat of passion), and he finally FINALLY sucked naruto off like he's been wanting to for so long XD that was so very yummy. i love how much he loved it, how dazed he got even from doing that. how he had to force himself not to melt into naruto's hair tugging and make sure naru didn't do it again while he was "in charge" lol (have i said before how much i love how that undoes him? the hair pulling? omg, i love hair pulling) and then kyaaaaa, seme!sasuke was quite good. i love how careful he was, paying attention to naruto's reactions, how they both acted and reacted to each other. omg, just all of it was so GOOOOOOOOD and so THEM. even naru's "begging" lol. oh yeah, and how out of it sasuke is after sex... "how cute sasuke is after sex" kyaa, yes, so very cute!! i loved it so much. i love you. :D

and ooh, so 'twas sesame that saw them kissing in the woods? wonder what'll happen when/if she meets sasuke with naruto, and etc. etc. i just can't wait to see the next development!

oh yeah, one last thing i wanted to mention, which made me giggle: when naruto told sasuke "call me a lazy bastard" and sasuke went "shikamaru" that CRACKED me UP because i am forever saying to my friends "i'm feelin' so shika today" or "call me shikamaru" whenever i'm lazy XD

anyway, awesome job as usual

~ lg

Sesame? Hanazashi? errh... Am I supposed to know who they are? Are they in the manga?
~KaraQ