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Wow. You're not a native speaker. Some native speakers have worse grammar than you. Love it so far and I want to read whatever else you add.

Lol ^^ Don't worry about it. Ok. We all make mistakes......-_-..............mainly me..........But who cares. ^^. To tell the truth, I'm Mexican American. And yet even though I was born & raised in America/California, I still have trouble spelling my own language. ^_^ LOl. And to make matters worse, I have trouble specking Spanish. My own native language. I even took a class in Spanish......-_-.......I got a D. Lol But what can you do?...Its just who I am. I can speak English, yet hardly spell it right, I can speak about 45% of Spanish, and understand about 50% of it, And last but not least I can't spell It. Lol But yet again, Its who I am. And I can't change who I am. So anyway don't worry about it. Ok. Because whether or not you can spell, Wont change the fact that I love your story and Will keep reading. ^_^ So update soon.
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Kisses ^_~

Lol ^^ Don't worry about it. Ok. We all make mistakes......-_-..............mainly me..........But who cares. ^^. To tell the truth, I'm Mexican American. And yet even though I was born & raised in America/California, I still have trouble spelling my own language. ^_^ LOl. And to make matters worse, I have trouble specking Spanish. My own native language. I even took a class in Spanish......-_-.......I got a D. Lol But what can you do?...Its just who I am. I can speak English, yet hardly spell it right, I can speak about 45% of Spanish, and understand about 50% of it, And last but not least I can't spell It. Lol But yet again, Its who I am. And I can't change who I am. So anyway don't worry about it. Ok. Because whether or not you can spell, Wont change the fact that I love your story and Will keep reading. ^_^ So update soon.
Love Devils-advrocat3
Kisses ^_~

Sorry I wrote the wrong name. But don't worry its me ok.
Kisses ^_~
PS
sorry again.

WOW! This story has potential!! When you started to describe Naruto back there-when he'd changed-I thought you were gonna say how Kyuubi turned out to be a female so Naruto turned into a girl and all that, now I wouldn't mind this but it's becoming quite common and...well...boring? It depends how the author explains it but there are more and more stories with that kinda plot.
Anywayz, I congratulate you on a story well done and I do like this story. It's different and that makes it intriguing! So please, update SOON and I promise you cookies in the form of much appreciated reviews!!
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Whoa Sasuke showed up! I don't think you're rushing the story at all. Poor Naruto having to deal with fangirls and were there a couple fanboys in there? I can't wait to see if Sasuke recognizes Naruto.

I really like your story. I love it when Naruto merges with Kyuubi! Update soon!

It's a nice start. Now let's see how it develops.
Now, I wonder, Will Naruto or Sasuke be the seme? (I don't knoe but it always is fun to ask ^_^. The authoress have the tendencie to exagerate in their responses)

UPDATE SOON!

(BTW, love Naruto's new wardrobe!!!!!!!!!)

AHH! that was awesome!! MissMayumi loves it!

Oh drool. Now that outfit produces a very nice mental image. I love this fic already and hope you update soon.