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by mischiefmaker

person tegan
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a nice story. :)
person Simon
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.. please give us the next chapter
good story, indeed.
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting take
person Josh
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm nice I like it hope you keep up the great writings please
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
too many fucking spaces. stop pressing "enter"
person Nellysan
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one out of all of your works. I think you should really conitnue it. Please?

If you do please email me
Bahamut916@hotmail.com
person Daniel Strook
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a great one, I truly hope you continue it. It has a lot of potential. NaruSaku \o/
person colin
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great start, can't wait for more.
person kyuubigirl
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Really sweet, sad, but sort of hopeful. And very sexy and believable.
person solar phoenix
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a nice little piece, but it left me thinking "What the hell just happened?" Good writing, no closure.

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