rate_review Reviews

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I enjoy this oh-so much.
Please write mooooore.

This could be awsome, but I have a serious problem with the point of view change. Personally, for me, the story reads really good in first person.

I thought this was a great start. I love how you portray your characters in different ways. Some people don't like OOC-ness, but I say, how is a person to say exactly what a character will be like? I think that there can be many different divergences that a character can take, so why not explore all of them? I especially liked Hinata’s...'test' :) I thought Sasuke was very cute and sweet with the children.

I really hope you continue this fic. There are not nearly enough good Sasukex Hinata fics out here.

Great job!
Ezzy