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for The Bad Boy and the Baby

by Midnightstorm

person minjin
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH YES YOU ARE SO GOOD!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH!!!!

I hope they will discover the love for each other, very soon ^^

person Starry
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like this, yes I do.

I think you should go on until the marriage, then write a sequel for after the marriage. That way, this fic won't seem too long and overwhelming to people who just start to read it. I also think that if you mentioned that Naruto can carry children and that Sasuke wants a family, it'd only be fair to have MPREG in the fic.
person oraday
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry! I thought I had reviewed for this, but I guess I didn't. Oh well, I'll review for every chapter from now^.^

First of all, I just wanna say I love the plot. It's great that Naruto has a family and that Itachi is a nice albeit aloof brother to Sasuke. I kinda wish Sasuke wasn't such a bastard, but if he wasn't, then he wouldn't be Sasuke, ne?

Woot for Naru-mommy. I like it when Naruto is the mommy to Sasuke's babies so I'm all for the Mpreg. :D

I'm definitely hooked on this story, especially because of all the sub-plot hints you've put in it. I can't wait to read more so I hope you update soon. Please e-mail me when you do update, if you don't mind^.^
person Nomme de Plume
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, i had forgotten about this story! thanks for updating! and i would definitely like to read what happens after the marriage. and if you're still taking the vote (and since i can't remember if i've already said anything on it) i wouldn't be against naruto having sasuke's baby!

anyway, i like how you're gradually developing their relationship. and when sakon (did i spell that right?) glared at naruto... is some kind of revenge going to take place later? cause i think that would really help the uchiha with his feelings toward the blonde.

keep up the great work! your stories are always so awesome!
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love it, I love it, I love it. O god naruto is hot. And I really want sasuke to ravish naruto....Ahhh (Day dreaming)......(drool)......(drool)......YAOI!!!!>_< Lol
Anyway Update soon ok. See ya latter. May it be soon. ^^
Kisses ^_~
person Kalypso
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, i think it would be good to see how it plays out once they get married and maybe have a kid. That would be cool. :)
person Darling_425
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. I hope you'll have time to update it soon :)
Keep the good stuff coming ! (no pun intended)
person Bluegrain
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is a great story PLEASE continue. :)
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Looking forward to your next update!
person Itachi's_lover
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please More MORE MORE!!! i loooove this story so much and it would be awesome if you continued it after the marrige, besides the story would feel a bit lacking if oyu jusst ended it after the marrige

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