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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's beautiful! More, please!
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey great chappie hope you update soon! bye for now :P
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was actually a pretty good lemon
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another uke Sasuke mpreg fic? This is the second one I've read of yours today! I am super happy! when Sasuke is uke of course. I can't wait to read the next chapter hope you update both stories really really soon...............
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh thats was tooo good! Update soon
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok that was just HOT!! nice and juicy lemon!! /holds out greedy little hands for more!!
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For your first lemon, that was really hot. I like how you only gave of small glimpses of the characters.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's very good, and I love your concept, but maybe you should clarify what text is what before the story starts...like what is dream, action, or thoughts