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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is this discontinued? such a shame, i liked it a lot! ; ^;
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plez continue its hot the story is getting good.
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is wondeful!! I would love to read more, please!! I love the way its written.
Not many people can write a realistic Mpreg, but you've done it. Or...at least you're on the road to doing it. lol
As I was saying, this is great! I love the way you portrayed Sasuke and Naruto. You've gotten Sasuke's angst down to the 'T'. lol
Update soon, I'm itching to read more!
Also, wonderful lemon. That was great! ^_^
Not many people can write a realistic Mpreg, but you've done it. Or...at least you're on the road to doing it. lol
As I was saying, this is great! I love the way you portrayed Sasuke and Naruto. You've gotten Sasuke's angst down to the 'T'. lol
Update soon, I'm itching to read more!
Also, wonderful lemon. That was great! ^_^
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!!
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it its really good and i cant wait for u to update
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow......now that is gonna be really intersting!!! *giggling like mad* i would love to see the look on their faces when they find out!!! the elders can kiss naruto's ass!
i love your story!! keep going!
i love your story!! keep going!
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now I need a cold shower. That was a beautiful chapter you had enough lemony goodness to be a good enterating read whithout being flffy sweet or over descriptive. I like how Kyubi is maniplating the sitition to his advantage to escape and wrek havoc when free and with Sasukes blood line the child will be powerful .
Well I will be look foward to next month and a new chapter.
keep up the good work.
Well I will be look foward to next month and a new chapter.
keep up the good work.
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I still love that, although it seems less shocking the second time around :). I couldn't help but notice a few of the typos snuck back in, you have a charka and a message that should read chakra and massage. It's all good though. I can't wait to see what happens next. LOL and I'm dying to see their reactions to Kyuubi's little gift XD.
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story! That lemon was hotter than most het scenes due to knowing it's Sasuke in disguise.
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah, that was hawt! And OMG the repercussions of this latest event are gonna be spectacular lol. Pls update soon!