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That was hilarious! It’s exactly how I imagine them having sex together for the first time. I love fics about people who are seen as perfect not being good at something. lol Great Job!

it's awesome!! very funny and well-written.
i want your NaruSasu more!

This was one of the best fics EVER! It was written so smoothly, and Naruto and Sasuke was totally in character. Very well done. Sexy and funny; who could ask for more? ^.~

Heidi

This is probably the most true to character yaoi that I have ever read. Others are good at describing sex but you captured their personalities so perfectly.

Totally awesome break from all the angst. So cute and awkward bewtween the two of them, and I love how everything between them is a battle. It always should be.

^_^ Ja!

AHAHAHAHAHA!! Awesome... *wipes tears of mirth* Thta was so well written and funny! I just love it when it's not all perfect and everything goes so smoothly...if it was gonna happen...it would happen like this...i love Naruto's reaction to winning the paper-rock-scissors match...IN YOUR FACE! lmao! Made me laugh so hard! Well done!