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liked it

Now, that was hot and lovely, I really liked it! Although the disappointing Neji-thing in the end ;) But Naruto molesting Sasuke is always a good thing ^^

wait! wait wait wait!!! AH!!!! WHO'S TEAR?!?! AHHHHHHHH!!

PLEASE TELL ME this is NOT a one shot. OMG.

write. more. now. kay? please? just type. type type type. more. and then, ya know, more would be cool.

yo.
sequel daw o!
daming nagrerequest..
hehe~
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Yes, I read it, but now I feel bad for Sasuke... poor sasuke... but why Neji????? (I am NOT a fan of Naru/Neji... it just seems wrong to me for some reason, lol) good little bitter end (i do kinda feel like Sasuke deserves it. what with leaving an' all. :P)

Oh WOW!! O_O I was so SHOCKED!!!

I must say that was pretty different ^O^!! Please don't let this be a one shot? Tell me it's not. I'd like to see this....go somewhere but if it doesn't I guess I'll just suck it up like a big girl ~_~. Mou...

Ara..? This isn't just a one-shot thing is it? *blinks* Tell me it's just the beginning, or at least that there's a sequel coming! T_T!!! Poor Sasuke... Ah.. *heart crumbles* Naze? I wished the both Sasuke and Naruto could be happy *smacks Orochimaru*.

*cough* Ahem, okay... review: It was pretty sweet at the beginning. I can't bring myself to say it was hot or steamy, because I really didn't find it like that. It seemed more sensual and, well, meaningful. When I found out Naruto thought it was Neji... AHHHHHH *pitchfork* Damn it, I know it wasn't exactly 'substitution' but it felt like that was what Naruto was doing T_T. Anyway, nice job, it's really angsty and makes my heart shiver =].

Finally, it's kind of like a switch up where Sasuke gets DENIED. I really liked Naruto's reaction, "like oh, you weren't Neji." Ouch. It was bittersweet. But I do think it could turn into a pretty interesting story. It'd be fun reading about Naruto's obsession with Haku, how Neji feels that he's a replacement (does he know?) and how Sasuke deals with the feelings that he WANTED it. What a love... uh, rectangle?

ooooooOOOOO!!! I like! I haven't come across something like this. I like the original idea. I wonder what'll happen next... Keep it up! It could have been a bit longer, some more detail. It was pretty vague. but overall, it was good!

take care!
sharingan.swirl

AHH!!! So cute. Sasuke wanted Naruto to ravage him. It was the tear that did me in