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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter hope to read more soon :D
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh you create such wonderful drama. This is such a well written and well thought out story. It really is a pleasure to read. Great job.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well... DAMN! I loves me my Gaara ^__^ He seems pretty pissed, neh? Anywho, as I said, you are God. Blah Blah Blah. You are a great writer, amd I love the way you portray the characters in this. Especially Gaara in super protective mode. Sweet stuff.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading your story. It doesn't really feel like that much is happening but then again it's the start of the story. Ano... can I have a link to Chasing Naruto. If it is what I think it is, then that is the first Naruto fanfic I ever read and I never finished it... You don't have too. Just wondering.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?! You would do a love tryangle and not a THREESOME?! @_@ But I want one! Yes I know, I have problems... and I can admit that. THREESOME ALL THE WAY! And with the wonderful way you write it would turn out fabulose! Your story is soo good already, the only way to make it better is... THREESOME! Ok I think I have stated my point enough, but PLEASE?! Can't wait for the next post! ^_^
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So... you do know you're God, yes? You know, I'm pretty sure the prayers were REALLY backing up when you were writing this. Please, allow them to back up some more.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Scratch the last review, don't write a love triangle. Gaara can be a very close friend, but it wouldn't be fair to Sasuke and Naruto to bring Gaara into their relationship picture
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I really love your story and i totally think you should go with the whole love triangle thing!! i love those....as long as it's SasuNaru in the end (hehehe, sorry Garra! But I'll always prefer SasuNaru!) But Yeah, so anyways...great story! and i can't wait 'till the next update!!!
-Jadebyrd
-Jadebyrd
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cough* hypocrite-ochiba *cough* triangles are a bit cliche in the naruto fandomverse... I like the tension and conflict you already have going with the plot alone and I adore the fact that Sasuke and Naruto immediately connected with no parties getting in the way of it. That said *cough* I am a sucker for reading every triangle out there... so if you feel you xxmustxx add to the extended list, it won't slow me down from reading this one bit!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gyaah! My last post was hyper-confusticating, wasn't it?! Just to clarify: emphatic reader's "NO" on the triangle... but even if you do write one, I will still read and hopefully continue to enjoy your lovely story!