rate_review Reviews

The story is great, don't think otherwise. I love the whole concept!! Please keep going!!

Yup I noticed the line, almost had a panic attack back there.
If you ask me I prefer WAFF against Angst, but yours is good, just please don't keep it going for a long time.
I'm looking forward to the next interlude!
And I hope Naruto doesn't leaves, and if he does, Sasuke leaves with him!

I love you.;_; from the bottom of my heart! Your like christmas and birthdays put together! Wow I love your story so far, and I can't wait to see what happen next. Poor Naruto...they just found out and already they hate him -_- bastards. Be strong Sasuke....but ummm question...what happen to the cute little fox that was with Naruto-kun...the one who glared at Sasuke. I liked him ^_^

Nice job, the little interludes help tie things together. Nice work.

too lazy to complete my name. yay for quick updates. gaara's POV was good. i liked it more than i thought, somtimes i get ADD when it's not sasuke or naruto, but i like how you did it. if you're worried about action scenes you should write that one shot, and i also got advice one time that you should just read stories that have good "fight" scenes. if you want like weapons scenes, even though it's AU, antilogicgirl is really good with katana/wakazashi thingies. questofdreams is really good with action in general from battle/fight scenes to describing jutsus (see the end battle scene of conviction or the body flicker technique in parallels). and there's another good mini-fight scene in phoenixdawn7's A New Dawn between Naruto and Sasuke. I can't wait for the Naru POV, too, btw! And *cough* the smut.

Chasing Naruto is such an awesome story that I've become Akaitsume's TOP stalkers. I seriously love that chick. And as for staying up really late just to read it, I've done the same thing.

.......on with the story......


Alright, now my comment can't be as long as I hope for it to be, but that's b/c it's almost one in the morning and I have an 8 o'clock class that I need to go to. This chapter (Eight) was awesome. It's another wonderful piece of work put together to make this lovely story. Making Gaara mad .......now I don't think that that was the smartest of things to do. So I'm very curious as to how the story will go in the next chapter.

My favorite lines:

“What’s going on?”

“What do you mean, Tsunade-sama?”

“You know what I mean, Uchiha. Just who is that boy, and why was your tongue down his throat?”

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“Oh, and Sasuke? If your tongue happens to go somewhere other than down someone’s throat, please don’t let Kakashi know. For crying out loud, he thinks of you as a son; he doesn’t need you doing those kinds of things in front of him!”


I swear, you gotta love Kakashi. He always makes things intersting. I bet he's just aching to give Sasuke advice on what other interesting things he could do with that tongue *perverted thoughts*


Later Nomme de Plume,
Can't wait again to hear from you. And if you get any flames, then just use them for Firewood (I believe that's something Akaitsume had said in one of her Author Notes ^^ ......or was it from fyredevyl =She wrote The Emerald Isles just so you know=) ---->http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544183040

well, Ja ne



~Ria ^.(/ <--- It supposed to be Deidera *w*'

Ahh I love this. I finished it this morning but didn't get to review! ZOMG I just love Sasu and Naru's relationship to pieces! And I love how slow they're taking it and how you're not having Sasuke be all "Gee, am I gay?" This is just perfect! Hmm...as much as I love a jealous!Sasuke, I am glad you decided not to do the love triangle because a. that happens a lot (though i like it) and b. this feels more, well, as IC as Gaara can be in an AU. But it will be great to learn about how Gaara knows Naruto other than they both lived in Suna! So much more to learn! And Sasuke is so... cute I guess. Oh and LOL though I kept seeing the blacksmith as like a sailor, I wanted to say I love how you seem able to make all the characters' voices different. You know how it can sound in stories that it's just the author's voice in each character, I like how you seem to not be doing that. Or maybe you're a laid back person and the voices just aren't stiff and formal? Ya know what I mean. I'm so hooked to this!

Is Gaara close to Naruto than just "friends" perhaps? Is that why he's feeling a bit greenish and protective. It would be quite a sight to see them both fighting for Naruto's attention! lol. This story is really interesting!! I would very much love to see what happens next!! Don't delay your add please, I'm begging you. Most authors tend to do that then eventually some readers lose interest in the story. This story is just too good and I can't wait to read what happens next!!
Don't disappoint...(do you ever?)

Yay!! I like an over protective Gaara!
And how everyone got stunned to see that it was Gaara the one that Naruto invited, I just pictured them in my mind, with their jaws hitting the floor. No one would have guessed it, the supposely cold Gaara has Naruto as a friend, almost as a younger brother ne?
I loved this chapter, keep it up!

hehe, i like how kakashi is kind of like sasuke's dad... in a weird ass way. but whatever, i like it. good chapter. and you're a history major? wow, i wanted to do that. but i'm not so sure anymore. i'm thinking more along the lines of comparative religion or humanities and minoring in asian studies. i might double major in the first two... but that can wait for a while. i haven't even gotten off my fat lazy ass.... to sit back down at the computer and write the next chapter for my story.

i'm procrastinating.... a lot. crap. anyway, hope u update soon.

-inc