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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The ending was sweet.. ^.^
Love the Story! Looking forward for more from you!
Love the Story! Looking forward for more from you!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this alot, I'm not a big fan of yaoi but I really liked this. I do hope you are going to continue it. I really liked the mood of it, and I also really liked the characterization. Thanks so much for writing.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty nice. I wouldn't mind a sequeal.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOT THE END...NOT THE END!!! Really, please continue. I will cry if you do not. I absolutely loved your ability to elicit emotion from your readers. I think that you have a real talent at writing something that can just tug at our heartstrings. I think I verbally let out an "Awww...that's cute" three or four times. You do have a few errors, but nothing that a beta couldn't help clean up. Please consider continuing.