rate_review Reviews

shit dude you write some amasing fucking prose. i never thought that a relationship between sai and hinata could be described so artfully, but you hit the nail on the head with this, keep it up!

i am intrigued by this story, i really want to see where you are going to take this. i will be looking out for the update!

I didn't think this story could get any better but I was thrilled to see you had decided to add a second chapter...
chapter two was brilliant. thanks for writing another great story.

Wow, I didn't expect to find a second chapter. That was,amazing. I loved the details of that moment. So very intense, thank you for writing this.

I love it! It's freakin fantastic.

i had my doubts about the pairing, but you did are really good job with it. thanks for sharing it.

Aaaww! Hestia lady you rock. I love you're writing style, it's so dry, you get to the point and then out of nowhere, you wax poetic and blow me away. I enjoy your reading your stuff, and in case you're worried I think dry is a good thing, but i'm probably using the wrong adjective.

wow...this was good. You know i've read alot of different parings, but never i mean never have i thought of Sai and Hinata...seriously. Well you have an awesome story...continue to write more...(^_^)

Beautifully written. I enjoyed the read!

Wow, thank you for putting it up. Even if you say it's a rough draft, I'm still very impressed. It may only be limey , but the chapter was very beautifully written. It had sensuous language to it. I don't know if I'm saying it right. It may not have been graphic but it was still very tittilating. As for the title, hmm, I see what you're saying. At the same time it still fits in well with the ending analogy you made. I honestly couldn't give you any better ideas. Thank you again for posting the story! I truley enjoyed this, it is a beautiful oneshot.