rate_review Reviews

I don't usually stray into the other sections of naruto.aff.net, but I'm glad I surfed your author page and found this. I wanted to stand up and cheer for Hinata when she yelled at Kiba- Kiba deserves getting yelled at in this, a lot, and Hinata DEFINITELY deserves to know how beautiful and sexy she is!

This is funny and moving and nicely snappy, courtesy of Sai- Hinata and Sai are good for each other. She's so nice, and he's so BLUNT, hopefully they can teach each other a few things. ^^ Poor Shino, though... Akamaru really doesn't care, but Shino does. He needs huggles, and to hit Kiba with a shovel. ^-^

What happened? The first three chapters where great, but chapter 4? It feels like it was written by a completely different, cruder writer.

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I need to know what happens next.

Sai and Hinata just seem so perfect for each other. Then the Kiba and Shino situation, oh the angst!

All in all, I love this story.

can't wait for more chapters! that was awsome! :D

i love this story the way you express those raw feelings.I am humbled my writing is just crap next to you beautifully worded work.Oh i so hope you will continue,I havent written over 15 stories and nothing even comes close to what i just read.Wow you are very talented!!!

moonwitch

godd, Shino, Kiba,..Hinata and Sai

I can't tell you how good This is cuz I don't know if there are words to express it but I will be looking out for the update.

Mistress, what a wonderful twist in the Shino, Kiba department, where will things go now? And how will Kiba react to everything. Can't wait to find out!

Oh my... a fourth chapter of this story! What a delightful surprise! The new installment was well worth the wait! Yes - this definitely made my day!

I think I read this before but since it has been a while and you have added a chapter I decided to start at the beginning. Hinata and Sai together - what great idea and an unusual pairing. And I love the way you write Sai - I love how blunt he is and how he carried Hinata home to his apartment because he felt it was time to start their love life. Now on to chapter 2.

Chapter 2 - Very nice. I'm glad you wrote about Sai and Hinata's first time. I don't usually read much het but I knew that I would enjoy anything you wrote (I did read and enjoyed the Traveling Pussy before you started D/s Naruto - cannot remember if I ever reviewed though.)