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Plz Keep lee on the List, that would make me such a happy camper. And make Neji die plz. He's Such a Bastard1

Whoa! -fans self- That was a awesome first lemon-snipet of this little smut saga! And I am not even a Naruto-Hinata fan and I enjoyed it! That proves all the more how good it was. More please? ^ ^

Wow, I liked this chapter. The interaction between Hinata and Naruto was very intense. Sai was also very funny. He's always such fun to read when he's in character, and you got him completly ic. As for suggestions, I'm fairly clueless. Sorry I can't be much help. Thanks for the chapter!

Hey, I wouldn't have a problem with you wimping out and keeping it NaruHina. With his Kage Bunshin and immense stamina, there's plenty thosee two can do by themselves. Besides, it's near impossible to find a strictly NaruHina fic.

OMG! please have a hinata/gaara part! In my opinion their the best pair ever. I like naruto and everything but I like a good gaara/hinata or even a shino/hinata story just as good since they are a bit harder to come by. I like how you don’t have hinata stuttering all the time too, not that’s there’s anything wrong with it but it’s a bit of a rarity and well I guess I just like that kinda thing. Hehe cant wait for the next chapter!

Hey I like the story.. I wouldlike to seeHinata just staywith Naruto and forget Kiba cuz she trulywants and needsis one.. Naruto is her truelove andthat was interesting about Hinata being quite endowed on the top but usually a good c-cup would do... But double D's is more than ahandful.. I hope to seeyour story progressandlet Naruto be with Hinata andthat will be that unless she cheats on him...

Sadly, I figured that. I just kind of expected her to be a little more honorable, and not want to be with someone who just seems to travel from one girl to the next, not in the relationships for the true feelings, and just for the action.

I love this story but i have one request.

PLZ FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, KEEP ROCK LEE ON THE FRIGGIN LIST1

don't wimp out...cause just Naruto would be boring. Adorably cute, but boring. The reason your fic has apeal is because you take that chance to allow Hinata to be with more than one man. I'm mad about Kakashi though...maybe because I like him too much. I would slow a bit on the sex/action scenes, they seem to rush by really quickly and I get confused to what's happening. Just make sure we as your audience know what's happening. I only say this because I love your fic and want it to be a good as humanly possible. Really, I do think its excellent and I will definitely read the next chapter when you post (I'm actually really excited for it). Oh, and find a way to have Gaara in there please? You could have her be dispatched to a mission on sand.

I can't wait to read chapter two. I love Hinta and Naruto as a pair. Down with Sakura let her have Saske. (I mean I like them too, but I just don't like her with Naruto.) Anyway, if she's going to have to marry Neji (which I hope that she doesn't, because Naruto's dreams are going to be realized and than she can marry him) I hope that she can at least taste Naruto's flesh at least a couple of dozen times. (I know I'm greedy like that.) And I've always pictured Kiba being a bit nasty in a deliciously good way. Looking forward to reading chapter two.