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*giggles* ooooooh... something else just came to mind... how about a Kiba/Hina/Shino three way?? ACK! *giggles* ok... 12 hour overnight shift makes me loopy... but still...think about it, ne?

Actually, neji is rather prissy and I could totally see himself being crazy protective over hinata. I'm glad he did get interrupted before raping his cousin, cuz I don't think this fic was meant to take such a dark turn. I do love how you made Naruto so obedient though. He *is* such a sweetheart, though I imagine he'd be a noisy one ;) Please do include more Naru/hina in the future. They're so cute together. Btw, I *love* how you wrote Sai in the earlier chapter. I literally laughed out loud at his lines. I like the fic so far. Keep up the good work.

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YAY. very good sex scene, great detail and insight. keep it up!!

Wow, that was just wow. I'm rather breathless with that chapter. I enjoyed all of the lemony goodness. Wow!

now that's what i'm talking about. i love hinata/naruto! i may not have enjoyed the neji chapter, cause who enjoys rape? but that doesn't mean i'll stop reading. i look forward to the next chapter!

Eh, not much to say I suppose.

I suppose I wonder how Naruto took the talk with Neji, and what really happened to him that night.

Glad he was taken out of the picture, Neji I mean.

I really don't think I will be reading much more of the story though, not if it just going to be Hinata/every male in Konoha or who ever the author wants to bang her. I was kind of hoping for a good story, but it's turning into somehting else.

Wow, that did shock me. I'm glad Neji was unsuccessful. I dislike most nc fic's because they're horrible unrealistic or pointless. This wasn't. I'll be happy to read whatever you have up on thursday or friday. It there like a mailing list to know when your updating fic's. I'm not quite used to this site yet, so I really don't have much of a clue.
Also, this story deserves a much higher rating then what it's gotten. I think most people don't really think of Hinata as being sexual. As a human being she's bound to be though, unless she were psycho. Besides, don't they always say you should beware of the quiet ones.
Also, I really look forward to some ShikaXHina action. Remebering the first chapter, I think that one could be deliciously kinky.
Thanks for the chapter.

What compelled you to make Hinata the village bicycle anyway? It just doesn't seem to fit her. Er, anyway, your writing style is quite good. I just wonder about your story ideas. But whatever floats your boat.

Very good so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Damn, son! having read this and your other fic, "make me forget", i can say you're one hell of an author.