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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I personally like that so far you've kept this to a threesome although seperating the guys so they each got a turn was a nice touch for a couple more chapters. I thought the sex between Sasuke and Sakura was very hot but I also like that you dealt with the emotions of what they've done, something like this could never be strait forward and simple especially where feelings are concerned.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
still as good as ever. go ahead and do a naruto chapter next but... make sure to make it a threesome again soon, i think everyone would agree with me on that point, you're just... so good at them but.... never mind, you get it.
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Anything by you is amazing! When I saw you wrote another chapter I did a MAJOR happy dance (well as much of a dance as I could cause I broke my ankle). I loved this chapter along with all the others and I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter!!!
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! This is the best Sasuke and Sakura moment!! It was just too short!
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great job on the fic ...i can see how the whole "keep your emotions out of this" might transform into a plot bunny it can make for somehthing pretty angsty....i mean considering its team seven: how can they not fall in love with eachother with after all they've been through....i feel that sasuke has a harder time convinceing himself more than anyone since he keep on repeating it
he said," i will do whatever it takes to complete the mission assigned to me, and while I hope it never comes down to this, I will sacrifice myself or even a team mate if that’s what it means to get the job done and I expect you and Naruto to do the same" this kinda goes back to him wanting get all the power that he can that way he can kill itachi......sasuke keeps reffering to sakura as cute and keeps cuddling up with her (yeah sasuke way to keep out those emotions)
it gonna be hard for naruto since i think you hint at the fact that he is still crushing on sakura so him keeping his emotions out of the picture might be hard for him considering he wears his heart on his sleeve.
well i could be reading to much into this but awesome fic keep up the good work....i think you should send them on a mission after naruto gets his turn....see how that works out
update soon *on all your stories*
he said," i will do whatever it takes to complete the mission assigned to me, and while I hope it never comes down to this, I will sacrifice myself or even a team mate if that’s what it means to get the job done and I expect you and Naruto to do the same" this kinda goes back to him wanting get all the power that he can that way he can kill itachi......sasuke keeps reffering to sakura as cute and keeps cuddling up with her (yeah sasuke way to keep out those emotions)
it gonna be hard for naruto since i think you hint at the fact that he is still crushing on sakura so him keeping his emotions out of the picture might be hard for him considering he wears his heart on his sleeve.
well i could be reading to much into this but awesome fic keep up the good work....i think you should send them on a mission after naruto gets his turn....see how that works out
update soon *on all your stories*
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i wouldnt recomend another guy dont think sakura could take 3 made another female ino or hinata since they both like one of the guys. you could do that to add some new material into a new chapter. heck you could have one of them walk in on them in the middle of it.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! MORE PLEASE !!!!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I don't usually write reviews, but I absolutely love your writing style. Keep writing!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmwhahahahahah That was sooo fucking hot!
Your brilliant! Did anyone ever tell you that?
lol great job!
Your brilliant! Did anyone ever tell you that?
lol great job!
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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