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by promise2003

person tasukigirl
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic. There's definitely not enough naru/gaara love out there. I can't wait to see more!
person Yuri-san
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
0_0 Oh my... awesome...
I will come back later and leave a more coherent review when my mind is no longer a pile of mush.

BTW, I love this fic's name XD
person Anna
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy... that was awesome!!
I take it that Naruto is going to call Sakura right? Ohhh she'll laugh her ass off when she knows why she has to heal Gaara! It was a great chapter *pats you in the back* can't wait for the next, let the plot begin!
person mel
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the way the story is developing. It's not just smut, there's plot too. Good job.
person Yuri-san
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.M.F.G. *fans self* hot... 0.0 (*melts* I just luff the relationship Gaara and Naruto have. ^^)
SSQQUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You MUST write more!!! *impatiently awaits "smutalicious" chapter*
I think this story is *incoherent babbling* --gah! there are no words! I'll have to settle for this: FUCKING AWSOME/HOT/*DROOLS*/*SQUEES*/SQUISHY/NARUTO/GAARA/KEYBOARD-MASHjdreiouto;0_mansex_0tu!!iyevtoptunor/NARUTO AND GAARA SHOULD GET MARRIED!!!!!! XXXXDDDDDDDDD;
person Hestia
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea, that's the right track! I love Gaara and Naruto as a couple. I don't see how Gaara can keep from licking that seal of Naruto's--I know just about every story has that in it, but that's because it's a seal that just screams out, "lick here!" Anyway, good stuff!!!
person stagoya
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the way that chaptre two was set up, very cool. ^^ Definitely looking forward to chaptre three.
person miyoko-chan
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ilove it. it's really good so far. please tell me that sasuke will not ruin it.

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person Oztan
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can not wait for the next chapter.
person mel
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I can't wait for the one. I'm really enjoying this story.

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