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by promise2003

person Shosuro
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You can't do that to me!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why the twists?!?!
Why am I really happy for Gaara/Naruto but secretly want Sasu/Naru?
Damnit!!!
I am torn!?!?
~sniff sniff~
I can't wait until tomorrow or Thursday!!!!
Damnit.........but I'll wait anyways................
person Fourthiv
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAAH!! garble bargle. I am at a lack of words. Now. I thought it was updated, but hey, editing is always good as well! Oh, I hope you update this story soon, I look forward to reading more! (>^_^)>
person mel
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter! I love this story and several others that you're working on. Keep up the good work.
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Gaara and Naruto are going to get married ^^ You know what would be funny.... Well what if Gaara had to wear a wedding dress. I can see it now, Gaara walkin down the isle, wearing a white wedding dress and of course that vail that covers the face, and a bouquet(sp?) of flowers. But this story needs Mpreg, for some reason I'm obssesed with either Gaara or Naruto getting pregnant(sp again? I can't spell anything right.). But please hurry and update =3
person Blakrose
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great hurry up with the next chapter. For once I don't detest Sasuke. I actually like the idea of Sasuke and Kakashi the way you have them written. I can't wait to see what happens to Sasuke.
person Randi
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What in the world? Ack! So many updates!

*Fangirls*

I loved each and every one of the chapters!

Please update soon!<3
person Harley
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Did I mention that I LOVE YOU!?!?!

Your story makes me warm and happy inside. And THANK YOU for /not/ mpregging this. I love the idea of them adopting an orphan.


SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!~!
person Yuri-san
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH, YAY! Gaara's gonna move to Konoha! *rolls out red carpet* I think you resolved that whole situation very satisfactorily. (I was worried...now I'm worried that whatever Naruto has planned is gonna backfire ^^;) It made a lot of sense in ways I didn't even think of.
*squeak* (Oo*squeak*?...)That whole scene with Naruto and Gaara was so cute! XD
The Kaka/Sasu stuff is just great! I have no idea how that'll end. As long as it's happy -and you said it would be happy, right? >=/*glares*
I looked at the HS doujin you're making! *bounces* That's so cool! =P

Hmmm...*reads over review* I don't seem as crazy today... XD
person Anna
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great! I'm looking forward to it then!

I like this chapter soooooo much, not only Gaara agreed to go live with Naruto at Konoha, but they got engaged too!

I can't wait to see what you got planned for them!

Ja ne!
person VRon
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so much fun ^^ I love it, keep going!

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