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by promise2003

person tasukigirl
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I laughed at the Snowman part too XD This chapter was totally my favorite. I melted at the intimacy between them. If I were a better artist, I'd totally try to make you fanart... but time restraints prevent me from trying >< Kudos. This is seriously my favorite fanfic at the moment.
person trulywicked
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Serves Sasuke right! I'm having no problems with the angst in this chapter. I love your fic and I doubt that anything you write from now on could change that. As to the sequal I say YIPPEE!!!!!!
person Fourthiv
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh, getting angsty, with a warning of more angst! I like that, although I am nervous about the angst and problems to come. I hope everything works out in the end.
person Anna
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are M.E.A.N!!!!!!

I was having fun at the start, but Sasuke!! He doesn't deserve that, even if he IS a bastard. *sniffs*

I hope you make up to him later, or I will think of killing you... maybe
person firestarburst
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke confuses me. Does he really have a thing for Kakashi or what? Cause he's already having thoughts about humping on Sai. Seriously I think he's just a horny bastard that'll jump in the sack with any one. If I'm confused about my feelings for two people I'm not adding a third to the list. Or use that person to relieve my sexual frustration. It's a wonder the guy knows jack about love he's to busy falling in lust with everyone.
Wonderful chapter by the way!
person Cindy
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the new characters you made up. Someone should draw them!
person kiss_me_deadly
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even if you hadn't given warning, this chapter just reeks of trouble on the horizon. This isn't going to be tear-inducing is it? Because I hate crying.
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, *tear*. Poor Sasuke... Now I'm confuzzled. Who's gonna hook up with him?
person Donedin
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FREAKIN GOD! O_O ga.... *stutter...sputter* WTF?! OMG I feel soooo bad for Sasuke right now! I can't even imagine what Sasuke is going through. And Kakashi needs a boot to the head! TO the FREAKIN head. Nock some sence into him. And BTW I am checking for updates by the houre.. so your not the only internet dependant I know. Who needs cocane when you have the net?! lol, Can't wait for the next update! ^_^
person Stagoya
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm so incredibly happy that you didn't have Naruto instantly jump Sasuke or any stupid crap like that. I would be so pissed if Naruto left Gaara for Sasuke. And I always love a bit of angst. ^^ So, I'll be looking forward to the next chaptre!

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