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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This, I think is a really, really good way to portray Naruto getting better and overcoming his troubles. In some stories he just seems to understand everything and gets better immidiatly. Here i think you have portrayed how he was undermined at a young age perfectly. I am really looking forward to the next update.
The choice of weapon was intresting too.
The choice of weapon was intresting too.
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
has this story been discontinued? Or just delayed?
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm re-reading this fic again and enjoyed everything once more. i'm also happy to see that you're still active and re-writing the chapters. Can't wait to read more. Thanks so much for sharing! And keep up the great work! :D
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... I'm addicted to this story, I hope you haven't forgotten about it...
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December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for taking your time with this story. It is wonderful how you are slowly building the bonds of Naruto to his teammates and at the same time not letting the story lag. I have to say that this is one of the best fan fiction i have read in a while. I look forward to updates. Please continue and finish this story. (^-^)y
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this fiction. I know you haven't updated it in a long time until recently but I read it again and thought I would try a plea of hope... that you might be bitten by a muse to continue on. It's such a wonderful story!! ^_^
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey there! since i thought the other version was pretty cool, i'd have to say this one was kinda goshdarn awesome! thanks for working on this ... glad to see you haven't abandoned it.
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi I love your story and can't wait till the next chapter is posted, you sooo rock.
P.S.
The Rasengan is not a Wind Chakra Nature Type it is completly Shape Chakra Manipulation and has no
Nature that was the next step that even the Yondaime was unable to do, though this could be because of the Kyuubi attack. The only one who has been able to combind the Rasengan with a Chakra Nature has been Naruto.
P.S.
The Rasengan is not a Wind Chakra Nature Type it is completly Shape Chakra Manipulation and has no
Nature that was the next step that even the Yondaime was unable to do, though this could be because of the Kyuubi attack. The only one who has been able to combind the Rasengan with a Chakra Nature has been Naruto.
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Been waiting for an update to this story for a long time even if it's only an rewrite, its still an awesome chapter. This story is one of the few reasons I still come to this site anymore. Please, continue to write and update.
~Kenya
~Kenya
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*shrieks happily* You worked on this! Omg, I have been stalking some of your stories in hopes you'd start working with them again. I love the new chapter you worked on. Fantastic. MORE MORE MORE!!!!