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for Angel's Touch

by ArtemisSensei

person Ruby Lips(not signed in)
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, though if you find a beta reader it would up the calibre. Interesting.

Keep writting.
person Nyuchan
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ti-hi ^.~ cute cute cute

Ah..i've found a little error in the word "Usurantonkachi". It's "UsurATonkachi" without the n in the middle.. just for info. Love the new chapter ^^
person Kinkay D.J.
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Stuffed angel Naruto in jammies ALRIGHT XD!!! Thank you! I love this chapter, thank you, thank you :D! This chapter is just what I needed to start the day with, I feel so refreshed now ^_^. Awesome chappie, keep up the good work, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter (squeals with glee, as she cuddles her stuffed Naruto^-^!).
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Luv the story its AWSUM! ^^ Hurry and update please.
person Kinkay D.J.
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far :). Though I wish the chapter was longer, but I still think it's good so far. Keep up the good work, and please update soon ^_^.
person Kinkay D.J.
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so it was a prolouge. OK! Now that I read chapter 1, now I know this is gonna be a great story, and I'll be checking on it for updates everyday :D! So please update as soon as you can ^-^!
person starletz
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a funny story! ^^ I love it! Keep it up okay?
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAAHHH!!! I love you!!! Please update soon!!! Naru-chan is cute and naive, though flying away with Sasuke is a sensible thing to do. Fan girls(esp. Ino and Sakura)...*shudders*. It's like you're faced with a life or death situation. Anyway, please update soon!
person Nyuchan
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.. this is so sweet ^.~

I'd love to read some more of Angel Naruto

So cute XD
person Evans
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I've read a story similar to this sometime ago... Can't remember. It also reminds me of the anime: Wish. xD I liked the end of chapter two, when Naruto stunned them all by whipping out his whitey-wings. It was a priceless moment, really. Oh, especially when Sasuke was being choked. God, I can imagine it all clearly in my head. ;]]]]

Keep up the good work, 'cos it looks pretty promising, you know...

~Lookin' forward to your next update,
Evans

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