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for Angel's Touch

by ArtemisSensei

person littleolmee
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh good Sasuke and Naruto are back in the okays, and now we got Gaara too! Cute chapter.
person Anna
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I certainly don't mind the rollercoaster, as long as you keep writting!
Mmmm... this is very interesting, now Kakashi is going to teach the three of them, I can't wait to see how that is going to turn out!
person Tati
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, to answer your question, a little drama can't hurt. It just adds a little flavor to the fluff. As long as there is a happy ending, I'm all for a little melodrama. (I'm a sucker for happy endings!) So just keep going, I believe your headed in the right direction. But I have a question for you? Is there going to be any Iruka in this story. I have to confess I'm a KakashixIruka fangirl (Bigtime!). I would love to see it. But it is your story, and you make the call. Keep up the great job. You have a great story developing. Just make sure you finish it. Please.
person CommGonn
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How is updating fast bad? x_x
anyways, another awesome chapter. *hugs xD*
-Kenneth
person bloodyrose
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are soo right seto/joey are great!!! maybe after this you might decide to write one ::hint:: ::hint:: ^_~. anyway about the story, yes it is getting a little depressing but the cuties are making up for it. *glomps you* you're the greatest! and i soooo can not wait for the Iruka/kakashi thing! and LEE!!! *holds up a sign board that says if sasuke can get jelous y not Naruto hehehe!
person MissMayumi
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! Gaara isn't as much of a bad boy as he is in the real Naruto..but I like his personality so far! This story reminds me of Ah! My goddess!..It's in a way kinda like it haha..update fast!
person Miko hanyou
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Problem fixed and the tensions are raising. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Cesia
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sqeals like the fan girl she is* I'm just totally in love with this story. I've read Pita Ten and this was a must. It's very well written, easy to understand, and proporly proportioned in my opinion. Not too much fluff but enough to make me happy.^o^ It's really good. Really looking forward to the next update.
person BrokenSouledPoetess (NSI)
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squishes Gaara* Nope! And he's just SO damned cute!
person Passing Reader
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, though I dont think I'll be passing where your storys concerned lol ;p
Who would have thought that Naruto would be needy for attention, must be used to getting it all the time ne? *giggle* Cant wait to see what happends next, Ja!

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