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wtf why did kakashi and jiraiya not eviscerate the bitch for talking to them like that

Good story, I like the plot so far, but it could use a little more detail during the chapter- they're, uh, kind of short, not that that's a bad thing. So, in conclusion, keep going damn it. *Steals a shocky monkey and tells it to keep you working* Meet Josh, the most evil creature you will ever encounter if you don't keep working, now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go run away like a scared little girl because he's a monkey armed with a tazer. *Clucks and disappears in a chicken shaped puff of smoke*

I like the plot of the story so far. I want to see what happens next.