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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was fuckin' awesome! i have fallen in love!!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey oh my dude i loved it go u! that was very hot and great job^^
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a very well written story, I hope that you post more if you have any written I really did like it. Even the yaoi seen was amazing. Thx for sharing, pls keep writing!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's SO CUUUUUTE! i like it.
the SasuNaru scene is so sweet, i like your writing style.
i want more!! can't wait for your new story~ Gambatte!!
the SasuNaru scene is so sweet, i like your writing style.
i want more!! can't wait for your new story~ Gambatte!!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shudder* so. damn. hot.
I love fics where Sasuke overhears Naruto *doing things* XP. This fic was fantastic ^^, I loved it. The paragraphing irritated me a little though, and I don't like the title (kssh~ I'm sorry!). But the fic itself was so delicious and steamy, who wouldn't love it? ^^ Thanks for writing it!
I love fics where Sasuke overhears Naruto *doing things* XP. This fic was fantastic ^^, I loved it. The paragraphing irritated me a little though, and I don't like the title (kssh~ I'm sorry!). But the fic itself was so delicious and steamy, who wouldn't love it? ^^ Thanks for writing it!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a good fic! I haven't been in the mood to read something long, so I was really happy when I started reading your one shot and found it to be well written and fun too! My favorite part was when Sasuke got the door slammed on him and the dialogue that followed that. :) I hope that you decide to do some more Yaoi, it was first attempt and I'm sure that you could write some super smoldering stuff if you did more. Could I request another one-shot of you sometime in the future? Perhaps with Gaara?