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i feel like i'm running all over the place trying to read this story in its entirity lol Neways so they've had sex before?! :o that kinda makes sense and the mission was an elaborate scheme!! lololol

the first chapter was pretty good and definitely left me wanting more =P

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When will you update this?

I love it! I've been reading it for years now and I neeeed you to finish it.

Please please, update!

Love this story, sooo happy you added another chapter, but WHY????!!! did you take out the lime in chapter 2 :(, sad... that was one of my favourite parts, and it doesn't read as well without it, you would have to make changes. Oh and I can help with the term you're searching for, it's not a cross over it's a cameo. Anyways, update soon, you promised a lemon :)

I....love...you...! <3

UWAHHHH!! Update soon! This is awfully hot!

Hellagoddess

God,I missed this!Draco.....ok.Why not.I wish you would describe Sasuke.whines and paws at computer screen.Love the constant novelty,who next!!!!!!!!Mm m m m ore please.Sooner than later is good.

I absolutely love this fic!!! The sexual tension between the two is delicious and I love how you keep bringing in random people from other animes and books (Ginji!!!!!! I love Ginji!!!!). I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

Love the fic ^^ especially the seductive Naruto here XD he's too......... XD

update soon!

Ash