rate_review Reviews

Wow.... I found myself snickering throughout the whole read. Not that it was bad, it wasn't bad, it was well done, but... just that it was a dad and son. I know, I wanted to read it, just to see... XD I'm like a cat, curiosity just kills me. I don't know what else to say, haha, this was well written, though it was obvious when you got tired of writing the smut at the end, but hey, thats FINE, Lord knows I didn't need to be reading about a daddy boinking his son more than I did. X3 Gross stuff is fun... And, may I say, this is the last place I'd ever expect to see a Steve Irwin memorial. XD I loved that guy, I'm still deeply hurt by his death. Anyway, yeah... good story. For some reason, I just got a mental image of Chouji and his dad... -slams head into wall-

~Darkhabit

yeah, that's me. wandering through the amount of fics here, turned on shota, found this, realized it was you who wrote it... sweatdropped... and then said, why not?

ook.

but a question. about a simple PWP lemon what should a reader say in the review? great lemon? i mean, what? if you say great lemon or something similar it sounds perverted. if you say well written one could think you're too ashamed to talk about the sex and tried to hold onto something less embarrassing.

so what? i don't like the couple, but i liked the shot. the lemon was great, the writing was great, the emotions were also great... and it didn't gross me out like i thought it would. why should it? i like incest in anime (the only one i hate is itasasu).

so good work. you always do good works. ^^ it was damn hot. now i want to write a lemon as well... but as i am, i would love bondage, because, yeah, i am a freak like that.

chus.

SOY/MF/Ceph

PS= best part ever "oh god! shikamaru" "no need to such formality, just call me shikamaru" XDXDXD *gets shot*