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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice! One of the few lemons I liked! Very um...hot and heavy...! Very very nice and it showed Sakura has an inner freak! Nice entering of the Sai comments! Naruto might feel a bit self conscious after that! Sakura/Naruto always my favorite pairing! I thought Sakura might be a bit more aggressive, but hey works for me!
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is that really the ending? (cries) ahh well it was nice! ^_^ i will now watch you! kuu kuu kuu! im retarded i know..
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great ending! I really enjoyed this story. Good job.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god...that was the best...I WORSHIP YOU!!!!!!!!
(seriously, there aren't a lot of good narusaku fics around despite how much people complain about there being too many, and you did great, AWESOME!!) This is undoubtatly the best Naruto/Sakura fic i have ever read, and one of the best fics period. Keep it up Hestia!!!
(I'm biulding a shrine for you now, my beloved Hestia ^_^ )
(seriously, there aren't a lot of good narusaku fics around despite how much people complain about there being too many, and you did great, AWESOME!!) This is undoubtatly the best Naruto/Sakura fic i have ever read, and one of the best fics period. Keep it up Hestia!!!
(I'm biulding a shrine for you now, my beloved Hestia ^_^ )
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah man this was a GREAT fic i was laughing and its HOT too! write more fics with Naruto clones!!!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol that story was great. I can't believe he almost killed her with sex. well anyways i lafed.
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, amazingly written in 3 days! It had all the workings of a superb PWP. More could be desired from the ending though. Perhaps taking a bit more time with plot development might be desirable?
BTW, if you are ever interested in collaborations, let me know via email. ^^
BTW, if you are ever interested in collaborations, let me know via email. ^^
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you don't stop it here. It is a good story make it more. I want to see it become something more than a short story. Or you could make a Nruto, Hinata pairing for another story....
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story keep up the work on the great narusaku stories
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A good ending. Very much so.