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person antilogicgirl
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. Now, that was an interesting game. I really did like this. The structure and pacing were excellent. And of course, the idea is what I like most. It would, after a few years, start to get a bit dull, yes? Though how anything could get dull between those two, I'll never be able to imagine. But, I digress. Wonderful job, and keep up the good work.

a/j
person Buffy
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH.MY.GOD!

That was amazing, and so hot! I love Naruto/Sasuke much more than Sasuke/Naruto, but I don't find it often so this was a treat! <3
person BrucesGirl
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing and so funny. And sexy and inventive. Half way though, I was like *lightbulb* I get it! ><;;; No one ever accused me, a natural blonde, of being the brightest on the block. But it was so funny, and the end really made me smile a lot.

Makes me want a significant other.

Or I could just have a really sexy pet bishounen and make him have sex with other pretty men.

Yeah... I'll just have a pet. ^_^

Thanks for the wonderful read!
person DxS
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha, that was quite amusing. You had me fooled in the begining...which was weird. But that was compleately wonderful.
person clowangel
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hoootttnesss!!! Loved it! :) Kinda suspected it was a game halfway through but XD it still managed to surprise me at the end. :P Loved it. Hope you write Neji and Hinata's wedding too. :) I'd love to see their game played again. ^^
person LemonsLuver
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have no other words to discribe this fic
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow
well ok more than one...HOTT man can you say UBER HOTTNSS...This has got to be like OmG...(to me)
This is a very thought out......I JUST LOVE IT....
person Shosuro
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What can I say that I haven't said before.....?
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I FREAKING LOVE IT!!!!
That was HOT!!!
SEXY!!!
FUNNY as Hell!!
Awe man that banter between the two was great!!! I laughed and I cried and I had to change my underwear!!!
That was too good to be true!!
You must write more!!!

****smile****
person kaesaku
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa~
that was hot!
some kinky game those two were playing..
heehee.. ;p
person meeksins
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenice~ ^-~
person comxgrrl
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I usualy don't review a lot, only when I read a story that is really good. Your story is very well writen and very cute. I had an inkiling about the end, and was glad I was rigth. Your story is coherent and well writen. It flows very well and the dialouge is not akward at all. Lovely short. Thanks.

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