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I LOVE YOU!!!!! MASTER!!! *cough* sorry about that, hysterics got the best of me......PLZ DEAR HEAVENS ABOVE!!!plz write more !!!!!

STILL WAITING FOR THAT UPDATE!!! PLEEEASE!!! SOON!!! I CANT WAIT ANY LONGER!!! IM GONA EXPLODE!!! sike, but for real..

AHHH Sakura was sooooooooooooo close!!! nooo inner sakura is locked away nooooooooo someone has to bring her out to fight, but even with out sakura did a good job, i thought for a while that Itachi wouldn't be able to control her...but in the end! sigh and she can't even pretend she's "under his control" the guy would know she was faking it! But hey maybe if inner sakura was awake they could pull it off and play a bigger mind game on itachi! that would be soo cool! i love this fic!!!!

NOOOO!!!! She gave in...oh my god! *weeps* NEXT PLEASE!!!

Damn! Double Damn! Holy hell this is one heck of a story! You must continue it! It's such a good story line not to mention it's very hot and steamy. Hope you will update soon!

I read the story in one sitting last, I think you have an excellent story the only thing I see is that it is a very slow start all I have read so far 4 chapters of Sakura & Itachi smut and not much action on Naruto and Sasuke to do anything about.

Your writing is wonderful and grammar is pretty close to spot on and while the idea of Itachi turning Sakura on Sasuke is not a new Idea I think you brought a fresh and intersting idea I would just like to see it pick up a little bit that's all.

Good Luck in your future writings.

HERE HERE HERE!!!HERES A REVIEW NOW GIVE ME THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!!

You so need to update.

I'm loving the story line.
Hope everything turns out with Sakura.

Update soon!

SO.... DAMN.... AMAZING.

.... and if I wasn't so sleepy, I'd write more good things, like how richly the detail is and how actiony and well paced it's moving along... Not to mention how well you put each of the characters into position.

But as it is... Carry on.

This is actually my first time reviewing a fan fiction so I don't really know where to start ^^"

Well I've just finsihed reading all 5 chapters in one go ^__^ What I can say is that your text flows nicely. I haven't noticed any annoying (excessive) repetivness of words or phrases. You're cabable of varying your sentences and that keeps the text alive. The creative story line also ads to this story's benefits. Another thing I like with good fan fiction is that I actually recognize the characters by behaviour not just names, meaning they're not out of charachter. Oh and I shrieked at the Rule #1 situation it was hilarious !

Well, I can't really think of anything more than this.

Looking forward to your next chapter! Hope you find loads of inspiration for it.