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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. You are such a good writer! I hope you plan on continuing this series! E-mail me when you update if you can.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah. That was incredibly hawt. And not completely WIP. Woah. Yes. Update. Please.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is soooo good! I can't wait for the next chapter! But if you misspell Itachi or Shikamaru again I may have to hurt you! It's Shik A maru! Ita C hi! *eye twitches and gets ready to command her plot bunnies for attack*
Neko
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really well written story. I like it a lot so far. I hope Sasuke beats the holy living hell out of Itachi. I don't like him having Sakura, the stupid bastard.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are switching between spelling Itachi's name as Itachi and Itashi. I am sure it is just a typo, but it is in there a LOT the wrong way. I am glad that she wasn't dominated immediately.
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Love it. ^^ This is by far one of the best Itachi/Sakura fics I have ever read, and with a plot too :P Update soon and continue the great work!
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love it. especially the insinuation of sasuke's attraction. just the entire idea, magnificent. i really enjoy your writing style and the fact that the characters were kept 'in-character'. Most stories lack that. Please continue. Were you planning on having Sakura completely fall for Itachi and vice versa or were you planning on perhaps giving it a twist and in the end returning to sasuke after itachi's death as he apparently cares. am i crazy? yeep. ok. well, just wanted to say i really enjoyed this story! and you're right! this one actually has a plot!
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oi! We want more! This story is awsome! Update soon please?
Neko
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I loved this chapter, the smut and really just the whole idea was great. The whole thing about her not really being in total control of her compasities was so great, it added so much to the whole mood of this chapter, and really added to Itachi's personality. I really can't wait to see what happens next, and I can't wait to see Sasuke's and Naruto's reaction to her dissaperance. Thanks so much for updating, and please do so again soon.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, I'm not trying to be rude - so don't take this the wrong way - I couldn't really get into this story because I felt Sakura was very OOC, I don't know if that was your intentions or not but the whole - her being the weakest stuff - she did train under Tsunade and is now very powerful, a force to be reckoned with - and the fact that she was being such a pushover/pussy about the whole Sasuke thing, Sakura was never a weak minded person and is very straightforward and frank. I would think she would give Sasuke a peice of her mind for treating her that way