rate_review Reviews

wooooooooooooow... my knees are all weak! this is so... i dunno, it's hard for me to make a oresice comment when all my senses are buzzing! u_u

I'll try anyway; the entire fic was true to the title: it began with what was not, what couldn't be, and hints of what he wanted it to be. for all we knew, it could have been either one of the pairing (lord knows sasuke is The Emo of the century),and we knew who it was in the second part. **please excuse while i drool for a while, i'll be back as soon as it's done** **done** Then comes the distraction, or description of the scene. a lovely one too. then return to logic (well, a twisted rationality), and then the 'enlightment', like this 'what was not' really can be.

XD awesome!!!

if i could only put this in a 'favortes' section, but there isn't any... >.>

okeeeeeeeeeeeeh, i just realised that i wasn't clear enough: i was kinda talking about the 'love'-atmosphere in there... this is so embarassing, but hey, i guess it's in my blood.

ach ja, und ich komme eigentlich aus oesterreich, bin aber auf der anderen seite der erde augewachsen; ich bin nicht SO gut, und spreche deshalb nicht so viel. wir koennen trotzdem kontakt aufnehmen? n_n bidooooeee...

tja, wir sehen uns!

deine,

chi no hana (ala silvia)

Awwww. That was nice. I think you handled the length quite well. I got a rather nice image in my head from the description given, and was pleasantly surprised by the ending. Nice job.

~_^

ooooo, short and sweet.^^ Good Job!