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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It would be cute, if yousr spelling didn't suck so bad.
No offense.
But your spelling is terrible >.>
No offense.
But your spelling is terrible >.>
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story seems to be going a little fast... but eh. I like the idea. Though I think you should start a new paragraph every time a new character starts talking. I also helps the readers :D So update soon!
Inus_Kagome_Forever
Inus_Kagome_Forever
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squee! Squee and Joy! Wonderful piece you have going here ^_^. Grammar and punctuation could use a little work, but hey so could all of ours. Great story idea and delivery, keep up the good work, (and update!)
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When I saw this posted I was so happy! I'm always looking for new stories to read, and hadn't found many I liked of this pairing. And regarding your latest chapter, *Quickly clamps hand over nosebleed* ...keep up the good work! =^.^=
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Luv it! must continue it very soon!!
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... just when it was gettin interestin' you stopped!!!! ARGH!!!!! just kidding! This seems like it is going to be interesting. I can't wait for chap. 2. I am always on the lookout for good gaara/lee...whatever the rating...though good smut is gooooood stuff. I look foward to reading more.