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for Not Old Enough

by looli

person Mimi Hyuuga
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter! You're off to a really great start here, i'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. This looks like an interesting story, and it's original, which is always a good thing! I wonder what Sasuke was so mad about? That Naruto was there, that Sakura was hugging Naruto, or was it something else? I'm probably looking too deep into it, I really need sleep...

I promise a review that makes sense for chapter 2! ^_~
person Emma
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great start, i'm really looking forward to more of this! :D
person Sapphirexkat2
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF. How could you be scared with a plot like this? This story is so nicely written, and I'm dying to find out more.

so continue before I die!!!1!1one
person Kalariona
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh yes. You bloody make sure you update this. I like the idea of Naruto and Ino being siblings. I really liked this.

Rie
xx
person KouTora
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You definately have a great start! I'm definately curious as to what's going to happen :D Keep up the great work! I can't wait till the next chapter.
person deion56
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice start update soon
person ss
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
he he he he... this is cute. Pretty good for a first fic... keep up the good work!

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