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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting start! I really like the way you've presented the plot so far; you've really intrigued me ^_^
I can't wait for an update! You've left such a great cliffhanger!!
I can't wait for an update! You've left such a great cliffhanger!!
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to update this? for the begining is very good and promising.
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter, do you plan to continue it?
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What happened? Iruka is my fav character, and I wanna know who did what to him? PLEEEEEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seems so dark, but I like it. I want to see where it's going.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please add more
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! THis is grat so far! I really do hope you continue writing! Please update soon!
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please add a chapter! I like the set up a lot. The only weakness I see is how can a very drunk Kakashi pick up on the Iruka-Genma tension? I like the Iruka point of view--especially where he is looking in the mirror.
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far. Genma is in trouble! I hope you update soon.
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is getting good! Update soon!