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for I (heart) Iruka

by Loquora

person lo
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Iruka is kinda being stupid, but I want to see where you go with this. Great job! I like what you have so far.
person antilogicgirl
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cannot tell you how much I love this. When i read the little part about checking one line...I jumped up and squealed and did a little dance it was so cute. If the rest of the story is as good as this, then I will be a happy, happy person. ^_^

a/j
person sris
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so HOT! I'm pretty slow today and didn't realize the student was Kakashi until Iruka snatched the note from him and the student smiled. I loved the humor and the way things didn't go too smoothly. "--look underneath the underneath" was absolutely brilliant. You kept them in character so well, all the trip wires and Iruka's casual talk about punishments... I just love your style! Please try to find time to update.
person Komikitty
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was great! But kakashi will still respect Iruka in the morning right? And Iruka's not going to be all "I can't believe I did that!" is he? nyaa...=^_^=
person YANG
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i r very late for reviewing, but, that reallt was an unforgettable night! this is great! oh please continue!
person snow887
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* that was very nice *drools*...please write more kakairu smut
person Whispers in the Wind
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squee. Squee and glompange. Love the progress of the story thus far, and the characterizations (I really, truly believe that Kakashi would go to the effort of presenting himself as a child and reserving the make-out booth for his date).
I saw that you had updated and sque'ed in delight, I really do look foreword to these instalments. No worries about the lemon, twas delightful; like lemon ice cream in summer *train of thought derails with pervy thoughts about lemon ice cream, Kakashi and innocent(?)Iruka enjoying said ice cream* *wipes away drool*
I digress, this fic rocks dem socks (and knocks dem boots), and I look foreword to your next update.
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very yummy smut.... :)
person Lo
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fun. Nice sex scene, I think they stayed in character and that just made it that much more fun. Great job.
person Sir Magus
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i luv kakaxiruka pairings!!! i cant wait to read the next chp hope u post it soon! ur story was amazing i luved the part where kakashi turned himself into a small child and sat through irukas class just to get a chance to ask him out-i could definitely see kakashi doing somethin like that

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