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by shirokada

person Death Angel 101
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's good
person Konoha Chick
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please, please dont stop writing, I want to know what you have in mind for what Sasuke is plotting. Those two seriously need to stop dancing around eachother and get it over with. bye!
person blue_genjutsu
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story so far and I hope you continue it! :)
person shishio
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's way to early for me to give you a deffinent answer on this, but I like the direction of the story. If you want, I'll beta for you. My e-mail address is fireprincess59@yahoo.com, e-mail me and I can look over your chapters and such. This story is pretty good so far, I like the way you are portraying the characters. Most people go into a ooc type of thing, heck, one even put Sasuke in a pink dress, though I forgot what it was called....
person themirror
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it...so....more chapters ^_^ yay!
person lo
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your spelling 'pale' very wrong, fix it and I might be able to continue reading.

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