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must read more! MUST READ MORE!!! please update...i need to know what Naruto and Gaara did with Neji and Lee!!!!

Awww! I wanna know what was in the fridge (pouts). I like this story so far so please update soon!!! =)

Oo
whats going on!! ahh! im DYiNG to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, this story was bad. The characters are OOC and the whole situation makes no sense. If an entire ANBU squad is ripped to shreds, why the hell would they send in a bunch of teenagers to find the killer? These kids have got to be ranking somewhere between Genin and Chunnin and yet their going out to do something ANBU, who are Elite Jounin, couldn't? If Tsunade was that stupid do yo relly think she'd be Hokage? The concept is great, but the way your telling this story, and the situation you've thrown them in is so incredibly stupid it makes me want to cry tears of blood. Not only that, but your style is extremly awkward and contradicts itself. Did you read this over before you posted it? There's a point where you say Ten Ten got killed, then that she turned into a monster, and then killed again. Well, which is it? Is she dead, or a monster? Pick one. Naruto's attitude makes sense after the fact if you're going for a whole "Evil Naruto" thing, but everything else is utter trash.

ooooh! I wonder what Iruka-sensei found?

the Naruto/Gaara is really good for this fic. I'm still wondering where you'll take this, so update soon!

Wow. this is pretty interesting, despite it being so dark. so.... update! This was very well-written, and I'd like to see more!

.. intresting, i would like to see how this is going to turn out.

wah!?!?!? Naruto doesnt care that TenTen was killed...
hmmmm..suspicious....
im intrigue...hope you update soon
btw, Thanx for more NarutoxGaara action!!! not enough of that out there!